This was great plz write more

Well besides some grammatical and spelling errors (due to the grammatical errors), this fic has no real problems. It is coherent, and the scenes are nicely seperated (which is generally a big problem). The characters are not way out of character. The main problem I have is the fact that I do not know exactly where this story starts off. After episode 24, skipping 25 and 26; or after EOE. The review says post-EOE, but you start off by the 'rescuers' finding Kaworus necklace. Later on you mention how easy it would be for Seele to attack, but arent all there EVAs destroyed? At least I assume they are since everyone is alive. My last question is how Rei and Misato survived? If you can clear these up next chapter (please post another chapter) I would be much enthused.

Well you've got the pilots messed up and Gendo dead! A good start, now will Yui in unit-01 make a difference? Well we'll see and I hope it is as good as this chapter!