Interesting way to incorporate firemen and cannibals. I laughed at those parts. I don't think Edward would have called Bella 'love' that much, and I did see that you tried to stop it, whether intentional or not.

Well-written and I enjoyed the plot of this fluff. I've been without good fluff save my own for too long, so thank you for that.-Winterluna

Amazing. I love this story. I love that Bella and Edward are talking about dreams and their interpretation.

That was cute and I never thought about past life as much.

if you decide to continue this one please do i can see it continuing. Great story BTW i Love Edward and Bella and you kept them as close to their characters as possible which i loved. great work)

Hello there
I read your second story
Very innovative idea and nicely written to!

It made for a nice, sweet read.)

aww i love it it's so sweet;

Aw, that's really cute, and a really good concept! I love it, and good luck in the contest! :D

Thanks for the second entry.)

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You're welcome, I enjoyed it
This was very cute, very fluffy. Good luck in the contest
ebhg:)