the flocks reactions really made my day! that was hilarious to me! i wonder... i wonder if theres an actual hidden control room and they only found the movements of the robots and the cameras... maybe they should make them jump off a cliff! and the director too. metal covered psyco...

awesome!

This a great chapter and a great story. You should definitely update soon!

I luv it! 'Max and Fang ARE KISSING INTENSELY!
Heehee. And about the Fax issue: I LUV Fax, so hopefully that helps.)

This made my day! I fell off my chair laughing at the end! Update soon, 'cause this story is really good. It actually sounds a lot like the real author.

u shud put fax! n wat does r&r meen? like ive seen it everywhere but idk wat it meens...

I love your story. You really match James Patterson's style.

Yahootie! Me enthusiam is muy muy bien! mucho enthusiam! yipe! :D

AIE! Angel is like Max, but minature. Teacup Max. XD

OMG
Amazing

Update soon

OMG! I did NOT realise it was you who wrote this! It's sososoo good! BTW, I did the chapter 10 review before this one, realised it was you, then posted this one!Btw, if you don't remember who I am, you reviewed my story Never quit.

Ooh, that last bit was so sweet! Totally perfect, except they're in Itex place! XD

make max kick him in the jewles and make them kut of her wings earase her memory and she likes a normal life fan gets to stay at the school and get tested on

love it! XD (girlie scream) woops. hahahahah.

awesome. job freaking done well.! XDD

Yay! I can't wait for the next chapters.

I liked this chapter; typical Max reaction P

Double yay more FAX! Keeps me happy lol

what stupid thing did fang do?