Ew...Uh...I can't put this nicely.

This sucks.

Your portrayal of Garnet sucks-then again...what's there to portray? Garnet is a lump of poor dialogue, underdeveloped character and hideously cheesy/predictable backstory.

It's not your fault but I do see some bits that feel a bit rushed-you might want to work on that.
Truth stings, huh?

Beautiful poem. Hope to see more from you.

This was such a touching and sweet poem. You wrote Garnet's thoughts well. This poem really makes you think about the end and how glad she was when he returned. Keep writing!

Oooohhhh...shivers!I almost always shiver when I'm to tired to cry,*yawn*I just good poem,loved it.

*sniffle* I guess Christmas brings out the awesome poet in most of us. This is really good. Most free verse is crap, but not this, no sir. Beautiful.

This is really beautiful! Well done!