me wants to see a badass naruto. XD

You gotta continue this one!

Keep writing. You are doing a great job. I hope that you have other stories that I can read.

I wish you would continue

I like it!

Short and to the point works here. Nice job.

Honestly I would like to see where this goes. Maybe make a story out of it instead of a short one shot. But otherwise interesting.

This deserves a sequel. Naruto putting everyone in their places is always a good plot.

Fucking awesome! More realistic than the manga.

That would be a great start for a Story. Even if you may leave this as a one shot its still great!

Your dear reader

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Don't really like the clishée Naruto gets shit from the shopkeepers and the village in gerneral, but knowing you it still will be an enjoyable story.
Keep it up.

always good to get something from you, but this time... meh. i thought that this was gonna start from team 7 bell training. or around that time frame.

Well... at least you're still alive... As for the oneshot... well... It's okay... just standard.

i hope you add more!..
I mean you have a great basic line!!

good start!

Lovely, absolutely delish! I loved it! I mean, dude... it's the extreme that everyone wanted Naruto to do after he was treated like that, seriously.

I loved it, seriously! I would also love it if you recorded what more 'deeds' he 'returned' to the people. It would certanly be interesting. It's up to you, though.

LOVED IT!