"Hi everybody! We just had sex!
Best. Line. Ever.

Oh, Alfred xD

That is all.-KiDGE

Toris isn't best friend of Feliks in real world. (yes! yes! yes!
They hate each other.

Aw man! I love Alfred's bluntness at the end!"Hey everybody," Alfred said cheerfully. "We just had sex."Alfred!Agatha glared at him.

Um...I mean we're now boyfriend and girlfriend?

That's classic! :D

No, you didn't fail. In fact, you did great!

Nice story
But you made a mistake and wrote Arthur at some point of the story