Wow. Totally awesome fic. I loved. I can't belieev that's the end though, and a kinda creepy ending too. Who teh hell is that random, lone person? hananh *

this is really good u should make a sequel

Wait a minute! What's Hamid doing in this chapter? He was killed in chapter 2!

Nice work. I appreciate the effort you put into building the background because it shaped/explained Ardeth's character more completely. At first I thought the time period resembled Indiana Jones a little too much, but it actually made alot of sense, and I was able to pick up the rhythm quickly.
I also like it when heroes are allowed to have a family- like Ardeth. Even though his wife played a small part, just the fact that she existed changed his character. In a good way of course. I have more respect for a man who is multi-faceted, rather than single-mindedly selfish, or wrapped up in his own self-worth. He needed to stay alive for his wife and child. I wonder why Sami had to die though.
Am Shere is "Ahm" Shere, I think.

I'm definitely interested in reading about the "lone figure.[Great epilogue!
Thank you, and good job!

Keep writing.

I liked it very much. Evil Nazis torture Ardeth...shame on them. Die evil Nazis...sorry, I'm Jewish. Anyway, the story was pretty good. Bravo.

Are you going to explain the mystery rider?

Are you going to explain the mystery rider?

AWESOME! I love it! I really like the whole honor thing. Great fic, write some more just like it!

Chapter 5 is the same as Chapter 1. Confusing. o_O Better fix it.

Little problem the Army of Anubis only rises every 5000 years, just to let you know...

I meant third movie. I'm also looking forward to what happens next. Nice job

on capturing the personalities

Very well written! You should probably send that to Universal.

That would be a good story for a second movie. keep up the good work!

WOW this was awesome! Write more! Is the last line of the story a clue of a future sequel? If so, then write it quick! Deana

Great Story! Dare I hope for a sequel?
You had a really good grasp on the characters and their personalities. Well done!

I'm desperate to find out what happens next- please be quick with the next chapter!