This is great! I can't wait for more, so please don't make me wait to long!

God, i'm totally loving this!! Looking forward to the next chapter! ^__^

Hey.
I really like this story so far, and can't wait to see what comes next. Please update soon :)

this is such a good story and I absolutely love that its from tony's point of view.

lots of love, miiamya

OMG! This story is so great! Great doesn't cover it actually. The writing is superb, the characters are in, well, character and Timmy is in trouble! Poor Jethro!

I can't wait for more! I am enjoying this tremendously! Thank you for sharing!

Glad that you included Sarah and Jethro.They ARE part of Tim's life,after all.And you remembered Palmer's vet experience.The little details always make a difference! Tony's reason for not returning Sarah's embrace made me smile...Don't whump Tim too much,ok?

Hold it together Tony, McGee needs you! Poor Jethro. Great chapter, and great story so far. Well done. More chapters please! Don't keep your faithful audience waiting!

Wow...what a beginning...and what did Tony do to this character that he attacked McGee?

You're doing great!

I really like the stories that give Gibbs more depth than most people give him credit for.

Can't wait to read the rest of it!

Great start. Hope you see it through - and SOON!
Thanks for writing

"can't put it down"
please continue with it soon.

Exciting! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Really good start. Definitely has got me hooked! Can't wait to see where this story goes!

Great story. Waiting for more.

You're doing a great job with this story! The tension and emotions are gripping and the Tim whump was terribly hard to read and I was one with their reactions.