Damn u are good! This story (like almost all the other u have) is soooo good, and yeah i dont really like angsty stories cuz they make me sad and i hate to feel depressed (such an stupid and uncomfortable emotion but i just couldnt stop reading and well maybe this fic has like 165624356372 years old but i couldnt leave without saying anything

Wonderful!

O_o LIKE! really enjoyed reading this Love the way you write angst! :D
BitteLP

I love how they talk.. If English was my mother tongue I would talk like that..but now, I barely understand them hh

And I love the stories...

That was probably one of the strangest things I'vr read on this site, and that's saying a lot. But I really like it, especially the 'gibberish for lack of a better word ), with the meanings half hidden in the beautiful words. A brilliant piece of writing.

Regards, Inked.

Shit, bitch goes to that shit!

bitch! how dare you post a fanfic like that?

Tryna kill me? Because frankly I'm a reader very emotional and beautiful things like this story I take the air, I wanted to cry No, I'm not exaggerating
I'm not kind of person who makes a profound analysis of history to post reviews of those complex things, so all I have to comment is that I love it!(as always
ja
PS: sorry for the words of profanity in the beginning of the review u_u

Nice story. Though I didn't bother to understand some of the lines anymore. XD

that was so awesome, im related to somebody who talks like that, almost exactly like that, he loved this story when i emailed it to him.

Hiya!

So I've read several of your stories the first 10 or so). I really like your writing style and the stories are rather entertaining.

I would like to see you do a Yullen pairing that is different from what you have been doing however.

Have you noticed that your stories have been following the same pattern? Allen and Kanda meet under some sort of circumstance, Allen is hiding his true feelings behind a mask, Kanda sees through that mask, Allen ends up getting sick or exhausted to the point of passing out, Kanda worries and starts to reveal his feelings about Allen, and then their complicated relationship ensues.

As much as I like your stories, none of your plot-lines stand out immensly from the others. Maybe switch the roles around a little. Sure, I understand that Allen is definitely uke and Kanda wouldn't be caught dead being anything other than seme. But still, switch it up a bit.

Have Kanda be the one in distress for once. Sure he's a tough guy, but he can be easily provoked, which could make for an easy downfall. Tyki seems to like toying around with Kanda, but it could just as easily be anyone. Maybe Road notices a connection developing between Kanda and Allen and does something to Kanda out of jealousy or to draw Allen into some type of trap.

Just a little suggestion. I think it could show the same things as your other stories, but in a bit of a different light. I would really like to see you do something like that. I'd like to see what you could come up with.

P.M. Me if you want. Love your work, but would love to see you expand your plot line a bit more.
HAPPY WRITING!-Kari

I understood everything, even the 'gibberish'. Then again... I am schizophrenic and neurotic, so maybe I'm not the perfect person to say that. :D

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Nice story. I really liked how they had the games of make believe and you also portrayed an insane person's mind impressively.

YAY! hey,hey guess what? Im adding you to my favourite authors list! oh! and this storys gonna be on my favor storys list! D

That was a bit confusing at first but you tied it up well at the end. And I like the way you used the stories, even if they didn't make much sence.

Brilliantly written, deep and entertaining.

Very well done-

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Wow

This was amazing... Yet im half asleep and this confused me so badly xD

wow good thing for kanda