I'm astonished you don't have more reviews than this, because this is one good story! I love the plot idea, and I love how you're adding snippets here and there - enough to momentarily satisfy, and still leave the reader wanting more details.

I'm really enjoying this, and I'd be really happy if this was updated!

Congrats on a story well started, and hopefully it'll be completed too!

~SnowFox3

Great chapter! Well done (:

I wish John had got together with Elizabeth, they were so suited, nice story hun, looking forward to see where its going.

This is definately an interesting take on John's feelings for elizabeth. I like whump and you have done that well. I hope rodney can save john's position on Atlantis.

Good chapter! (:

A very interesting beginning. Seems just like John to not leave her behind.

Very Interesting!

Keep this up. So Fran's being taken over by Elizabeth!

Good chapter! Well done (:

This is was nice, thanks I really wish they hadnt gotten rid off Elizabeth. Hope you do some more, I'd like to see where this could go. Again Thanks

I'm enjoying this so far, keep it up! I look forward to reading more. (: