 social twist 2009-06-04 . chapter 1 wow. fantastic realistic writing, brillient characterisation and a wonderful orginal concept. i would love this whole idea (prank goes wrong, brian damage, guilt and new possibilities) to be a full story, as opposed to two chapters. Its a fantastically plausible way to give Severus and MWPP new starts, as opposed to the tried and tested "magic goes wrong" scenario. For some reason, Severus with child like simplicty seems a great concept.
Any way, like i said, fantastic all round, love it, and hope you get the new chapters out soon- if you do I will send you a cookie! |
 Melora 2009-06-04 . chapter 1 For further writing, you may be interested in this site:
http:// w . geocities . com /sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)
It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.
Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Melora Brockert, SUM student |