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Reviews for: 30 Elements of Darkness
WhySoSerious1992
2009-06-30 . chapter 2
aww, he got his memory back by kissing remmy! that's so cute ^_^
Davinci
2009-06-19 . chapter 2
Aw. 11-year-old-in-the-body-of-a-17-year-old Severus is so cute!

Lovely fic until now, and really enjoyable.
social twist
2009-06-04 . chapter 1
wow. fantastic realistic writing, brillient characterisation and a wonderful orginal concept. i would love this whole idea (prank goes wrong, brian damage, guilt and new possibilities) to be a full story, as opposed to two chapters. Its a fantastically plausible way to give Severus and MWPP new starts, as opposed to the tried and tested "magic goes wrong" scenario. For some reason, Severus with child like simplicty seems a great concept.

Any way, like i said, fantastic all round, love it, and hope you get the new chapters out soon- if you do I will send you a cookie!
MingIsRandom
2009-06-04 . chapter 1
aw. this brought me tears. *pats Severus' head* you'll get better...
Melora
2009-06-04 . chapter 1
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

http:// w . geocities . com /sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student
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