If John had an ounce of self preservation, he'd let the Daedalus doctors clean him up before turning himself over to Carson; but he doesn't.
Two Mules for Sister Sara...was kinda ridiculous but I liked it anyway.
Great story and I love Ronon's sense of humor.

I loved it! And you're ending line was perfect!

Great story! *iz a proud whumper* Ya whumped John so well. Well done. Good on ya! Cheers! }:O

Raven

Good story. I love John and Ronon fighting together. The Daedalus sure called it close, they should dock Caldwell's pay! Enjoyed it, thanks!

SW

I think I've watched that movie too. :) Awesome story.

Sheppard and Ronon stories seem to forever be in short supply, even more so those that are well-written. Although, to be completely honest, I would be extremely hard-pressed to find fault with any of your stories. Love the Butch and Sundance atmosphere of this one, with a nice steal from "Two Mules for Sister Sara"...although must admit a slight internalchuckle trying to picture Rononin a nun's habit. Thank you for adding enjoyment to my day.

Heavy excitement and suspense. Great job! Thanks!.

I've not seen the movie that they are refering to, but it was a really good story. I don't think even MacGyver would have thought of that think with the arrow and the gunpowder.

Great read. Loved the tension at the end, and Ronon's devotion to Shep. Reminded me a little of Search and Rescue.

Great story!

I really enjoyed reading this

Interesting piece of work, stunning and suspenseful from start to end. I liked it !

Good one! Love the Clint references.

Good Ronon and John bonding.

Nice job with this! Loved the end. :)

So glad to have you back! It really made my morning perfect... coffee, a well written story, our favorite boys and a nice dose of whump...not necessarily in that order! Thanks:)