This story is really great-- I've been enjoying it immensely. Will there be an update? Or has the story been abandoned? I hope not! You've crafted a highly enjoyable ST story. :)

Pouts and gives you the puppy eyes...after all, it worked with Kirk.:winks::
V.

This is quite the cliffhanger! I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Also, I really liked the Kirk-Spock interaction in this one...and I'm glad they finally made up.

i LOVE your updates so please continue, i'm a little stretched for time do that is why this review is so short. loved the newest chapter can't wait to find out more. Spock is such a puppy!


SEE the Love,
Fly

Oh my god, no! What a cliffhanger! I just read through this whole story so far, and I was not expecting the sudden stop. Here's hoping you write quickly; I can't wait to see what happens next!

Well will it be friend, foe or Romulan? Though they probably fall into the foe catagory.

You are amazing. How can I even describe this story.
Its taken me a bit to be able to read this whole thing due to work errands life ect.. Which has made it that much more intense and wonderful.
Your Spock and Kirk are beyond brilliant and I just love every piece of it.
I love how you leave these little hints or treasures, in my opinion, of their friendship. Like glances, hidden emotions, and expressions...besides all the totally beautiful dramatic scenes.
HAHA I don't even know if I'm making sense. All I know is that this story is beautifully written and I honestly wish I could go purchase it at Barnes and Noble with a fancy little cover. :)
Your an excellent writer.

This is absolutely excellent. I'm surprised you didn't sell this to a publisher and have it made into one of the Star Trek novels. It's great. The characters, the pacing. This could have been a two-parter episode of TOS.

OMG this chapter was so good! Watching each other sleep and Spock apologizing for overeacting,, it was so sweet. The ending is kiilling me though, please update soon! Great writing as usual, love it so much!

Excellent dialogue. Spock was so very very...very TOS Spock it made me wince. Commence verbal stabbage and logic beatdown...now! And Jim, so very very...very TOS Jim. This argument/resolution was done so well, it was like watching verbal tennis except that the tennis ball happened to be a bomb on a timer and whomever court it ended in last it would blow both of the players up. Perhaps that was a mixed metaphor! The bit about Spock giving him puppy dog eyes made me chuckle, though I've always seen Vulcans as catty--perhaps its just Spock :P And then the "we shouldn't serve" unspoken apology >.< What can I say, but I loved this chapter! Jim still thinking things are like a game, I wonder if that's because if he stopped he'd have to take their relationship far more seriously than he's willing to admit.

Why?! It´s something personal against me, or do you really enjoy being evil in a general sense?
Cliffhanger...again.
I almost fell from the edge of my chair.LOL

I enjoyed Kirk´s thoughts about Spock.Is interesting to see Spock at his icy self with kirk.Not a common interaction.
I like that both can be honest.

Tractor beam...I hate you!
Well, just a little. LOL
V.

Enterprise or not ? (looking forward to seeing next chapter :p)

I liked this chapter too, and I liked interaction between Jim and Spock ^^

Thank you for this and see you next time ;)

This is my first review of your story. Just wanted to let you know that I love it. You've got Kirk and Spock right on, and I'm really looking forward to your next update. Thanks for the great story.

Another great chapter! I love how Jim and Spock resolved things. Will their mental bond thing come up again. Update soon!

This chapter blew me away. Your writing is incredible. "He wished he could see the stars." This line killed me. Its so perfectly Kirk. I love the interaction between them. Its beautiful. I cannot wait for your next update.