Thanks for the shoutout! Anyway, I'm so sad it's the last chapter. Scott is just a great character. He's willing to raise another man's child. That's how much he loves Natalie. I'm so glad that Keith's spot can bring Abby, Scott, and Natalie many great memories. Scott is such a perfect gentleman, asking Mr. Anderson for Natalie's hand before he asks her.

Overall, it's such a great ending to the story! Everything's in place and the conflict was resolved.

~Karla

This was amazing. This whole story. It made me cry so hard, i was bawling, it wasnt even real...just to think Keith died...its unbearable because she loved him so much, she had his child...i just wished she would see him more often because i cried when he saw Abby, i cried when hewas dead, i cried when she went to the funeral and it said the casket was going down in the ground, i cried nearly all the story only rarely did i stop, and that was just a food break. I really think you should write more on Keith, its just write it like the movie but different, like when Keith hadent died yet, just change everything he says or whatever, but keep the 'partner'...i cry every time he says that. I love how hes so caring for Natalie and for this child. I just love that movie, its my favorite, its touching, and it got me obsessed with jesse mccartney...i think it was pretty clever to pretend keith hated jesse mccartney cause he IS jesse...

Wow! This was perfect. thank you for writing a great story.hope to see another "Keith" story from you soon!

I can't believe this was the last chapter! I really loved this story! :)

I really love how you had Scott have a lot of similarities like Keith, and I love how he called Natalie partner--that was so sweet. I think it was a sign that they are meant to be together--plus, he has a truck!

I thought it was so sweet of Scott to asked Pete (I'm assuming he asked her if he could start dating Natalie)--that was so sweet of him to do that. Even though Scott isn't Keith, I'm glad that Natalie found herself another great guy, and plus, he gets around great with Abby! :)

I really loved the ending to this story! In my mind it was perfect. Once again, great chapter! :)

Acciodanrad9

Oh, I also loved how they had a picnic at the cliff! :)

"Keef"?! That's too cute! Wow! Abby is a really smart child for a two year old. According to my mom, I was pretty ignorant about everything! LOL! Is the engagement ring a sign of the future... maybe Scott? I'm glad, that Natalie realized that it was time to talk about Keith and that even though, he has passed on, he's still watching them. And now, Scott is there to comfort both mother and child. UPDATE SOON!

~KARLA

PS: If all kids were like Abby, I think that landing degrees would be really easy. LOL! Randomness!

The dream with Keith, Abby, and Natalie was so cute. I just loved how Abby was so attached to Keith--it was adorable. And Keith's reason why he's reading Abby Harry Potter was cute. I loved how he said 'eated' and called it an Abbisym. That was so cute.

I also loved how him and his dad were going to get Abby a dog, and how he told Natalie that it was final since the dog already had a name. Oh, and I do kind of agree with Keith about the cat thing--maybe just 'cause I'm more of a dog person. Lol. It was all just so Keith. It was sad, too, since it was Natalie's dream, and it couldn't be reality. Oh! I also loved how they were engaged in her dream!

I'm glad Natalie finally told Abby, and I loved how even though she was sad, she was optimistic about Scott. Oh! I loved how she noticed that Keith had a truck like Scott that was cute!

This was a great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Acciodanrad9

This made me cry.I do wish Keith was still alive.Good,keep it up.

OMG! OMG! It's a sign! Scott and Natalie are meant to be! I mean, how many times can you say you met your spouse in a cemetary?! Crazy, I know! It's like Keith-sent! Anyway, I'm glad that Scott is being there for her since Keith is dead and all... Abby is one mischivious and smart child. Waking up poor Zach like that? She sounds really coherent too! I love Finding Nemo! Can't wait to read about her dream! ::wink, wink:: UPDATE SOON!

~KARLA

Aw. This was such a cute chapter! You left it off with a cliffy! Ah!

I really loved Henry talking about Keith when he was little. I always love Henry talking about Keith, since I'm sure there's tons of stuff Natalie doesn't know...since they didn't have enough time. I loved how Keith got into everything when he started crawling (sounds like Keith!)

The transition of time was really smooth, and I really liked how Natalie met Scott. And then end of the scene, where she see him driving a truck was great. I do, however, like how Natalie isn't dating him yet and taking it slow with him, and I'm glad that Scott understand.

I really liked how Natalie understand that Keith would want her to find love again, but she's just not ready yet.

Oh! Abby was so cut when waking up Zach. I love how she said that she learned it from Aunt Cynthia and Natalie just said, "Good Girl". So cute!

I also loved that Scott had Abby watchin Nemo (that is such cute movie!). I do, however, wonder who Natalie's going to dream about...I am thinking ,dare I say, Scott? Since I think the previous chapter was the last time we saw Keith.

Great chapter as always, and Abby is just SO cute! I can't wait until you update again!

Acciodanrad9

Holyness! I can't believe Death is some blonde guy! I agree with Keith! I'm glad he was allowed to go see Abby! His emotions are so easy to emphatize with. Poor Natalie! I wonder if Abby one day will somewhat remember something... Although, I can't remember what I did ten minutes ago so I can't expect a baby to remember that... LOL! Where is Keith going? OMG! Will someone tell Natalie about Keith? That would be morbidly funny and downright creepy! Okay! UPDATE SOON!

~KARLA

PS: I'm sad that it was Keith's final appearance... ='[

Hey!

This was such a cute chapter. Gosh, Keith holding Abby so just so...sweet.

I really like the fact that you had Keith be alive so he could hold Abby, that was a really neat twist that I wasn't expecting. Of course, it was sad that he couldn't see Natalie, but I can totally understand why he can'r. She'd problly think she was going crazy!

When Keith held her, gosh, it was perfect, and when he said "I think I'm in love." *Sigh*. It was just so cute and sweet. This whole chapter was so cute! Lol.

I'm really glad Keith got to hold his daughter! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Acciodanrad9

P.S. I used to watch "Touched By An Angel" all the time when I was little, too! :) I like how you added Andrew!

aw wow!!so good!.

Yay! We know her name! I love it! I'll have to check online what the meaning of her name means after I write this!

I really like the part when Henry was telling Natalie about Keith being born at 5 in the morning. I really love reading new bits of Keith's past and life--which I sure am Natalie is too! Lol.

Yay! I'm so glad Keith was there after she had her epidural and while she was having the baby. That was a clever twist I was not expecting, but I am glad that he was there for her. Oh, and the whole point with Keith saying he wanted Kidney Stones was funny. At first, I was like what is he talking about! That was a really funny, but sweet part.

I loved that her eyes were green like Keith's. And it was cut of Zach to be scared that he was going to break the baby--oh, and him saying he was going to corrupt Abby was funny!

This was a great chapter, and I am happy that it's not the end. Can't wait for the next one. Update soon! :)

Acciodanrad9

Yay! Peanut, or should I say Abby?, has been born! Sounds painful! I've never been through it, but even the word "childbirth" sounds painful and hard and not fun! LOL! I'm glad that Keith was there though 'cause otherwise it would be so tragic!

Kidney Stones? It totally reminded me of my Anatomy teacher who had Kidney stones and he managed to save one, put it a ziplock bag, and tape it to the board for everyone to see. He compared it to childbirth for men. It was funny and creepy (seeing the thing he named Spike!)! UPDATE SOON!

~KARLA

PS: I'm so relieved this is not the end! =D

A grumpy, lazy, waddling, basketball-size belly, anxious, and plain out weird Natalie is just beyond belief! LOL! Like from your description I can picture, but basing it on my usual impression of her, it's kinda hard. So great job!

I'm glad that Keith is semi-there for her! Like even though he's dead, he reaches out and soothes her as much as he can. SO SWEET! For some reason, I could NOT stop laughing at the smacking Mr. Anderson got (when Natalie told her mom that her water had broken!). HA HA! YAY! Henry is going to be in the hospital to receive his granddaughter! UPDATE SOON!

~KARLA