Wow, talk about ending the story on a high...and frightening...note. You're not really going to kill Lilo off for real, are you? There's too many stories like that.

Ah, another chosen one! This one wielding Earth's might and sticking with the power of Love. And it's colored green! Cool beans!

This quote: "We guys can't resist when a woman touches us, looks at us in the eyes and their voices"...it reminds me of a saying. "Not all blondes are dumb, but all men are men." XD

More than one? Neato!

Well, at least 589's not causing trouble anymore. But it's getting kind of hard to keep track of who's good or who's evil. There's so many baddies running around!

So, is Ivy a warlock?

Ah, at last the Powers that Be have taken notice of the spectacle that's going on. And, luckily, there is apparently a "Chosen One" who can defeat the darkness. I wonder who he is?

Nice chapter. The story is kinda like world of warcraft.

A bakery. A demon went into a bakery.

I just can't stop laughing at that thought. I mean, I know most experiments can't resist good food, but...XD

i love it its great

So being super powerful and crazy runs in the family, huh? Well, at least they've convinced Divine to help them using the classic "guilt trip" techinque. She DOES owe Justin.

Hmm. This story ought to be commanding more attention. I wonder why it's not got as many reviews. It deserves more, really it does.

Meanwhile, at least Cobra now knows how to stop that psychopathic murdering ** he's been chasing. Now if he can just keep the closest "ally" he's found from killing off Justin, he should be one step closer to victory! :D

Yep, reading this story reminds me of something I heard from "Yu-gi-oh, the abridged series". It went like this: "Too bad Kaiba's got all that money or we could just, y'know, call the cops". Only in this case, it's "Screw the rules, I have POWER", not "Money". You know what I mean?

It just REALLY bugs me, but that's just me. Anyhow, something that I really liked in this chapter is how they've got an experimental child running around in the house and there's nothing they can do about it. XD

Hmm, I hope none of the girls are afraid of spiders. Jumba's right though...they need to exercise caution. A single touch of a spider's web, a little jerking...and out it comes!

The image of a lovestruck Kixx for some reason is now sticking in my head as being very funny. :)

Hmm, this isn't really a "general" story, it's more of another horror story, especially with all the violence mentioned. Not that it's not gripping, but it's also...frightening too. Phoenix is CRAZY. :O

Aw, Shark and Hydra are back together, that's sweet! But now STELLA'S undergoing some...problems. Only time will tell what awful fate is trying to catch up to her...and I can't wait to see what!

You don't just know how to make cool villainesses, but creepy monsters too! I'm definitely glad I'm reading your work. Tell me...what got you into writing here?