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Veggiebad
2009-11-12 . chapter 20
So, is Ivy a warlock?
ngrey651
2009-11-10 . chapter 19
Ah, at last the Powers that Be have taken notice of the spectacle that's going on. And, luckily, there is apparently a "Chosen One" who can defeat the darkness. I wonder who he is?
Veggiebad
2009-11-10 . chapter 19
Nice chapter. The story is kinda like world of warcraft.
ngrey651
2009-10-29 . chapter 18
A bakery. A demon went into a bakery.

I just can't stop laughing at that thought. I mean, I know most experiments can't resist good food, but...XD
stitch8000
2009-10-24 . chapter 17
i love it its great
ngrey651
2009-10-22 . chapter 16
So being super powerful and crazy runs in the family, huh? Well, at least they've convinced Divine to help them using the classic "guilt trip" techinque. She DOES owe Justin.
ngrey651
2009-10-20 . chapter 15
Hmm. This story ought to be commanding more attention. I wonder why it's not got as many reviews. It deserves more, really it does.

Meanwhile, at least Cobra now knows how to stop that psychopathic murdering ** he's been chasing. Now if he can just keep the closest "ally" he's found from killing off Justin, he should be one step closer to victory! :D
ngrey651
2009-10-06 . chapter 14
Yep, reading this story reminds me of something I heard from "Yu-gi-oh, the abridged series". It went like this: "Too bad Kaiba's got all that money or we could just, y'know, call the cops". Only in this case, it's "Screw the rules, I have POWER", not "Money". You know what I mean?

It just REALLY bugs me, but that's just me. Anyhow, something that I really liked in this chapter is how they've got an experimental child running around in the house and there's nothing they can do about it. XD
ngrey651
2009-08-28 . chapter 13
Hmm, I hope none of the girls are afraid of spiders. Jumba's right though...they need to exercise caution. A single touch of a spider's web, a little jerking...and out it comes!

The image of a lovestruck Kixx for some reason is now sticking in my head as being very funny. :)
ngrey651
2009-08-03 . chapter 12
Hmm, this isn't really a "general" story, it's more of another horror story, especially with all the violence mentioned. Not that it's not gripping, but it's also...frightening too. Phoenix is CRAZY. :O
ngrey651
2009-07-16 . chapter 11
Aw, Shark and Hydra are back together, that's sweet! But now STELLA'S undergoing some...problems. Only time will tell what awful fate is trying to catch up to her...and I can't wait to see what!
ngrey651
2009-07-12 . chapter 10
You don't just know how to make cool villainesses, but creepy monsters too! I'm definitely glad I'm reading your work. Tell me...what got you into writing here?
ngrey651
2009-07-10 . chapter 9
Well, at least he doesn't have to worry about them causing trouble in his ship anymore! Hammy better be paying him a LOT of money, considering how often his stuff gets wrecked.

Hmm. And ANOTHER experiment hath been activated! I wonder who it might be?
ngrey651
2009-07-03 . chapter 8
Ah, children are a blessing and a curse. A beautiful curse, really. Pyro sure likes causing trouble!

And I've read up a lot on mythology and folklore. Witches had "familiars"...animal spirits that aided them and acted as assistants and protectors. Neat stuff.
ngrey651
2009-06-25 . chapter 7
Mentally turned into a baby? Aw, that's kinda cute. Sad, but also cute.

And now more darkness is coming. Only time shall tell what the new challenges will bring.
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