I am the creator of A2A and I hereby hire you to oversee the filming of these scenes! No, just kidding, but I wish I was so I could...

If only these had been in there... glad to know I'm not the only one who daydreamed of this!

Thank you for brightening my night :D

Jazzola :)

You captured how I wanted them to end perfectly... thanks a lot :D

That argument about pouting was so funny and highly plausible :D

Just read this all the way through - It fits in really well with the series.

Nell

Thanks so much for writing these wonderful alternate endings ] x

These rewrites just get better every time

hehe im loving reading these !

You should totally be the script writer for series 3

aww this is so sweet ]

Make me wonna go FORWARD in time to watch series 3

hehe i love this one ! so funny

oh what i'd give for that to happen !

I like the alternating insights into their minds in this chapter, and Gene's depression is very moving. So is their growing closeness, especially when we know how soon it will be destroyed. I look forward to reading your multi-chapter take on Episode 8.

Thank you! This is a very plausible suggestion for what might be in That Letter. And the tear in Gene's eye! Ah! That got me. And his being chivalrous again - go to bed alone...

Oh, good! You got them to go on a date AND to have a kiss! Better than the mean old Beeb. The hestiant, clipped, dialogue, neither revealing their feelings, is very true to both characters.

Woo Hoo! :-D

Again, it SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED! :-p

Jess

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Very very good writting