Loved this chapter! I like the tension between Alex and Gene.

One point: The people in Ep5 are the Drakes, Alex's in-laws. But as they aren't seen anymore in the series, forget about it! :)

Oh lovely...loved their 'date' lol!

Gem x

Brill, as usual. Yay, they actually went on a date this time!

x lioness x

'Wow molls. I believe i just kissed Gene Hunt'

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Awesome line, made me smile..

I really love reading this fic (or mini fics), can't wait for more..

xx

Brilliant again, i just cant wait till you do your version of episode 8, thats gonna be very interesting

So this time we get an insight into BOTH their minds. Better and better. I must say I'd never thought of this scene degenerating into a quarrel, but at least they kiss and make up at the end! Bring on the other episodes!

Ah, so this is when they work out how to bug Mac's office. Very interesting. And I love the GALEX too, with the insights into Gene's mind. Super!

Aw lovely!

Gem x

I love the insights into what they're both thinking! And the last line made me laugh 0)

Really good, liked the "Don’t think about wanting to kiss her." bit - made me smile 0) poor Gene!

Also liked learning what they're both thinking and what they're not saying out loud.

xTimegirlx these are really good you seem to have the characters down to pat, you keep them all short taught and tense love to see how you deal episode 8

I was so annoyed when the phone rang and ended the conversation, if only this did happen, bring on chapter 5 :) x

Brill, yet again. Love Gene teasing her, very Gene-like. I was so annoyed when that phone call interrupted them in the episode!

Loved it! I especially like the fact that it takes place just after the episode finishes or parts that we don't see (Like in Mac's office)

Brill, I was always curious as to how Alex would have reacted to the news that Gene was going to Plymouth. Can't wait for the next installment.