I hadn't realized I'd reached the end.
It was a great story, touching and real. I was sorry to see BA killed, but that just seemed to make it more realistic in the end. There was always the risk to thier job and enforced lifestyle on the run...
I will definately be reading your other stories (I've actually already read a couple).

I stand corrected! I don't know why I thought Murdock and BA were present during the scene of the prologue...
I guess that dashed my hopes that it was all some mistake or con by the bad guys, somehow...
Still as good as ever, though.
I sure hope Face and Hannibal work things out between themselves- they need each other now. And I sure hope Face can eventually come to terms about killing Ashly, if she is indeed dead. It would be a hard thing to do, even after the things she did.
Of to read more!

Wonderful, wonderful story so far. I love the way you portray the guys- it seems even more realistic than the show while still keeping thier personalities and character intact. I like the way they are as informal with each other as the the close friends and team mates they are while still maintaining the discipline of their military training, especially Hannibal, who is still every inch the commander.
The story's not finished yet and I have laughed and cried and felt thier frustration with the situation. I really should have reviewed before now, but I just couldn't leave the story long enough. I never saw BA's death coming (but wasn't he still in the prologue? Hm...) I think you are realistically cathing the emotions and the reactions the others would display at such a tragedy. Can't wait to continue, which I'm off to do right now.

I'm so sad to see this excellent story end :)
It's been quite a ride! Thank you.
Love! Belker

Very good story. Read it all in a row. Your dialogues are great. I especially liked the interaction between Face and Murdock (before he fell in a coma lol). I hope you'll write another story. You have a great talent there =)

I'm glad you included the epilogue. It was a well-written story. I enjoyed Face's conflict, and the interaction between him and Hannibal at the end was perfect.

But I'm not sure I totally understood why he killed Ashley at the end. The scene between Ashley and Face was a little confusing, and didn't really answer my questions.

Thanks, again, for the epilogue - I'm a huge Murdock fan. Hate to see him never wake up!

Looking forward to your next story. Keep writing!!

I think you did a great job with the characters and the dialogue. I don't think its right to say I 'enjoyed' this story. It's more 'I couldn't stop reading it'. I know the story is done, but I don't think it's over. Do I dare say I'm looking forward to the next installment?

So glad to see murdock awake and ok.

But is ashley really dead.

Wow

Crazy way to get revenge.\

All of this b/c he had a thing with her mom.

Wow

They got caught by Decker.

I wish Decker would of been more suspicious of Ashley.

Hopefully Face and Hannibal can get to Murdock before she can try anything.

I wonder what was up with that flashback Face had. It seemed to have him a bit messed up between the crash he just had and the f/b one.

Great chapter, can't wait to see where you're taking this!

Oh, Hannibal is on the jazz :)
It's a classic 'they know that I know that they know that...'
I loved to see Face do what he does best- and that include both shooting and acting.
Love! /Belker

So ashley has someone else helping her find the rest of the A-team. Wow she is really smart. She smarter than Hannibal thinks. She figured out that they set the explosion and that Murdock isnt really dead.

Hannibal and FAce better be on guard.

OK, you are going to continue this story, right?! It is so obvious you have put a lot of sweat and tears into your work. It's very detailed, vivid, and the characterizations are dead on. I hope life allows you the time to finish it so that all your fans (and characters) can have closure. Thank you for sharing your talents with us mere mortals :)

O! I'm hooked. Lovely prologue, very angsty, well set up. I love the emotional turmoil! I know the rest will be just as good. Keep up the good work!