Gotta mention I love the Doctor Who reference.

But I also really like this story.. I really like the way you write, and how you describe things. It seems original and different, but perfect at getting the point across. A little like the show itself, I guess.

This is a great insight into the relationship between Mason and George. I love it! One of my favorite lines:
"Everyone knows that getting the shimmies for Mason is like petting a cat the wrong way, like a screwdriver made slightly sonic."
Great job!

Oh ho ho, was that a Doctor Who reference I saw there? ;P

My geekiness aside, I love this. You, m'dear, are brilliant; this was absolutely gorgeous, and so perfectly them, and I'm just gushing here.

"She doesn’t try to explain it most days, on the days when she’s stuck on the curves of his palm or distracted by the crook of his smile. Or when a word or a glance of his sticks in her veins like molasses, clogging up her ventricles until her heart’s full of him. Most days."

I shouldn't love that paragraph as much as I do. Did I mention you're brilliant yet? Fantastic job with this, hun.