I love your writing!

Wow. Pour Timmy, he's so screwed up.
You really get him in this. It's depressing but totally true!

Cool! Extremely intense. It's cool how the context for this is left to the reader's imagination. I like "Robin isn't supposed to break, at least not without some serious help from the major villians."

Geez, Tim's really depressed here. I'm not sure, but this could probably fit into the comics pretty well right now. Since Dick became Batman, and Damien is his Robin, Tim's whereabouts are unknown at the moment(He was just barely mentioned in the first issue of the new "Batman and Robin" book, but they didn't say where he was). Maybe I'll find out next week when the new "Red Robin" book comes out, I think Tim is going to be the new Red Robin. Anyway, nice job with this little one-shot.