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IronSpockMaster 4/25/11 . chapter 1
Firstly, I loved the back story. You gave just the right amount of information about how the characters were where they were and why they were acting in certain ways without confusing or boring me, which is an achievement in itself.
I like how the Draco/Ginny relationship is very brief and barely even seen, and yet so important. And although I hate Dramione, I was supposed to hate it in this story. (If that makes sense...
The dialogue was realistic and it flowed well and the characters were well written. I really enjoyed reading this one.
Miss-Talkative 11/9/10 . chapter 1
Oh my god! Dramione? Noooooooo! I feel like judas for reading anything D/Hr implied! How could you? My heart broke in sync with Ginnys! Hermione the tart! She didn't say anything knowing the fact that Ginny is going to have her heart broken.

Nevertheless, the writing and characterisation was fantastic. I think an one shot where Ginny gets her revenge is a perfect solution! Thank you.

Shai xx
MemoriesFade 11/7/10 . chapter 1
SCUBA!*scrubs eyes* How could you? This is blasphemy I tell you. I demand you write a sequel in which Hermione drugged Draco and forced him to be there and/or they both die a terribly painful death. I want one right now!

Gosh, where to start? Ginny was so excited about her meeting with Draco. I don't understand how a friend could do that to someone, especially considering Ginny's past.

Poor thing.

She better get revenge.

Ann
chromeknickers 11/5/10 . chapter 1
I... *opens and closes mouth like a fish out of water* I don't even know where to begin!

I want to pummel Draco and dropkick Hermione. I mean, I'm not a Dramione fan, but Hermione was completely callous here. She didn't say a thing even though Ginny mentioned Draco it's not like that's a common name! Draco didn't seem as though he was committing to Ginny, but he could have NOT entertained anything with Ginny whilst with Hermione.*growls* I am thoroughly disgusted with the two of them, and I am quite vindictively happy that Ginny will have her revenge./rant

Your writing, however, was excellent, and I loved the pun in your title the juxtaposition of owls with mobiles. Very clever and creative. _

Lia
imadoodlenoodle 3/23/10 . chapter 1
*blinks
When I saw that this was under angst and was DG I dove straight in, as I know you're a good writer and angst is one of my favourite categories.
If I was a die-hard DG and not open to Dramione I think I would be leaving a *very* annoyed review.

There you go drawing us in with whispered promises of delightful DG and you turn it in to DH.
I like it. It's short but the reader (well, I), goes through so many different emotions. There's humour, the hope and the crushing betrayal. I wasn't expecting it to end how it did based on how it began.
I felt sorry for Ginny, annoyed at Draco and I want to get a really *reallY* big book, place Hermione's head in it and slam it shut.
Kind of like a guillotine, but it's actually a book. Can you imagine it? Or has my description gone horrible awry?
Is that even the right word? It's two in the morning so I'm not on top form, it's a shame I can't sleep.
Anyway, a very imaginative story and I liked the name of Draco's owl. That got a smile.'or when she had lost a promising promotion to the bicycle of the secretary pool.
One of my favourite lines.
Thank you for the story,

Sarah.
R3.0 2/25/10 . chapter 1
Wow... I'm surprised you of all people wrote this one. You absolutely hate Dramione. This must have been painful for you... I will say it was painful for me as well, but for all the right reasons... Man, the last couple of D/G fics I've read have been painful... *sigh* I hope the next ones make me fall in love with the couple again.
EvylinDevilin 1/12/10 . chapter 1
The ending was... wow. You got me; I did not see that coming. The entire story was very well written and the pace was perfect. Excellent job here!
Hollandtheamoeba 11/3/09 . chapter 1
Nice..Very nice. I most certainly didn't see that ending coming! And the title paints more than one picture!"She charmed the devil’s toy with a powerful hex that would give whoever picked it up something to remember her by. She hoped it hurt as much as her aching heart.
A true Ginny ending! Powerful&memorable...Awesome!

I've alot to learn from you, especially the way you structure and phrase words&sentences.)
Idiotic Superhero 10/14/09 . chapter 1
That was... unexpected.

Your story made me feel sorry for Ginny and actually made me feel hollow. Really.
How could Hermione do that to poor Ginny?
And Draco! Why would he even want to go out with Hermione when there's Ginny? My theory is that he went out with Hermione first and just decided to screw Ginny for the sake of it. It sounds sad, but it's true.

Anyhow, it was a great read.
MidnightxRed 8/30/09 . chapter 1
Oh now that was brilliant :D

I thought I was in store for a Draco/Ginny, but I get a Dramione and a hurt and betrayed Ginny instead. I don't think I've read one like it and I really anjoyed reading it :D

The description is amazing as always and I love how you portray the characters.
Hybrid-Kothari 8/29/09 . chapter 1
Wow, Scuba, that was new, and quite unexpexted, yeah?
The ending, I mean. It was genius because you feel like everything is going smoothly, developing... And it seems like there is going to be lots of D/G... until the date part scene...
I was like O_O

Then I couldn't believe things turned out to be like that. Argh! I just hate that disgusting mudblood right now! That BITCH! Ginny should go berserk, by all means and kill her. u_u
Anomaly-Anomaly 7/7/09 . chapter 1
Aww... That was sad!

Anyways, brilliant as always.
Lunar Fire 6/10/09 . chapter 1
Oh, what a tease you are, Scuba. And here I was thinking I was going to be reading a Draco/Ginny fic, not a Dramione one. That's just torture.

How could Hermione do that to poor, Ginny? Keep up the good work. I love reading your writing.

Lunar Fire
Ms. Rosemary Mees 6/10/09 . chapter 1
Hermione is ho. She should be punched in the face.

I really liked this. I did not expect the ending at all. I was two seconds away from gaping before I caught myself.
I do wonder who Draco started seeing first though, who is the "other woman" of sorts...
starlit skyes 6/8/09 . chapter 1
Wow, I like this. I like how you made the muggle object fit into the plot of this, and Hermione. Of course, I don't like that it ends in Dramione, but anyway. Nice! Great job, and good luck on the polls! _
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