aw... that was not chessy that was creative, but what he said was chessy. i would fall in love with him all over again for that proposal. i love it. and the penguin room is an awesome idea.

Oh, I sprained my ankle! Oh, and I liked your story. ;P

cheesiest proposal ever? one time we were at a restaurant and this guy on a date ordered champagne for him and his date and when the champagne came out the glass had a ring in it-CHEE-ZY! but at least its a proposal-my parents got engaged and they were just like


my mum: so maybe we should get married

my dad: whatever

so ya! anywayz love the story!

aww... at first I was like: ok? how is this cheesy? but the sprained ankle wow it makes you want to laugh :P
Wine and flowers: 150 dollars
Sapphire ring: 2,100 dollars
Plan for stalling: about 10 seconds and a sprained ankle
Ending up proposing a little early yet still getting accepted: Priceless
There are somethings money can't buy for everything else there's MasterCard
ha ha lol couldn't resist
I really liked this story... well I really like most of your stories :P keep it up!
~Tonks-Rocks

p.s. I loved the idea for the penguin room... so cuute

lol yea i agree cheesy much but i loved it lol..
i did find a couple of errors and thought you would like to know about them, cause i know i always like to know..I'm sorry if this sounds bitchy at all...

I was beginning to thing (think?) this was all a mistake, that I had asked to soon, when I felt her arms wrap tightly around me.

The wedding was beautiful. Alice had out done herself on everything. The reception was amazing as well. We all spent the evening dancing and having a great time. It was one of the happiest moments of me (my life?)

Bella had chosen a penguin theme for the baby room. So Alice being Alice had someone cone in (come)

Bella did an amazing job. I’ve heard that giving birth to one baby was hard enough let alone to. (two)

Though sore and extremely tired she just as healthy as before she was even pregnant (she was just as)

Weren’t you the one you was all (who was all)

And I’ll wake you with you here too (awake)

that was good ♥

aw that was so cute!!
i loved it
very well written
x
B

it's a little too perfect you know no conflicts it would be better if you add chapter 2 anyways just a suggestion