Oh God, these last two lines were too sad! I loved how you portrayed their characters so well! Agh you're an amazing writer, I love your stories!

Keep up the good work!

Greets

Shiroi Ichigo

oi, very nicely done!

This makes my heart ache, it was so engaging. Lelouch and Kallen were both written superbly within the story and I loved the build up to the ending. That ending was just beautiful. Thank you.

So heartbreaking. And the last two lines... damn.

Brilliant characterization. Especially kallen. I love how you wrote her (she is my fav character from the girls) and I love you for capturing her personality so well.

Thank you for sharing this piece. I will go check your other fics now *.*

Protecting the queen... but never protecting himself.

Loosing.

You made a typo around the start of the story, and it really detracted from the sentence, because the typo is emphasized in italics and all so it's sort of hard to miss.

Other than minor grammar/spelling points every now and again, though, I think this was a really good story. I absolutely loved the ending; it was such a subtle one, and I love endings like that.

Great job, really. Thank you for this.

You are an absolutely amazing writer. Really, truly, without a doubt. Specatcular.

Well done. It was very bittersweet, and I liked it. :)

Awwww that's so cute! You totally got Lelouch's charactor and Kallen's as far as i remember but I'm starting to forget what she was like (it's been a while since i watched it). Love it loads and loads, it's going straight on my favourites!

I can guess where you wanted to go with this fic, but ... somehow I just found it too much of a pain to think it through.

-chronodekar

I like this. I like the idea and reading the ending just kind of gave me a chill. Great story.

Amazing story. I love the way you write, every bit of this had me hooked.

sad but epic

...

i dont know whether i should make a smiling or a sad face...

:):(:(:)

yeah

Oh god. I liked the story a lot.

The last two lines just startled me though. I wasn't prepared for that. Yet, it was still a good story.

Brilliant.

The last two lines made me cry a bit. :')