This is a very interesting story. I like the depth with which Edward thinks here. Nice work.

Another awesomely philosophical and sweet fic.

Deliciously satisfying, like a good nap. You make sleep sound delightful! :)

Very lovely, I enjoyed the quick respite from reality!

Oh, that made me feel butterflies in my tummy!

this is beautiful! i was actually looking at your werewolf that stole christmas story when i came across it. I am super sad that you have not updated the aforementioned story in forever, but I am happy to know that your creative juices are still flowing. the way you described forever as the space between two kisses is profound, and the way you described Edward's thoughts was so perfect that i was literally enraptured. A very few fan fiction writers in my experience have ever done that. Please keep up the great work!
P.S. and please don't think i am always this much of a kiss ass, because i truthfully don't even review all that often. I just really enjoy your work!

Stunning, yet again.

Your characterization of Edward is rich, layered and true to canon.

Your writing is genuine and flows beautifully. I love the little things about this piece -cell memory [rather than sense], 4eva...

"Emmett would laugh and be disparaging, Carlisle would consider and Jasper would quote. Esme would soothe, Alice would assure, and Rosalie –

Rosalie would think of flowers on a grave."

^.^ That was my absolute favorite bit though. The sheer amount of insight in those three lines is amazing. You got to the heart of who the Cullen's are as characters and in such a concise way.

You're truly talented. Thank you for writing.

I love the way you've written this, trying to capture what the term forever actually means (much like love - that glorious, insatiable concept) through a character that literally has to worry about such things (and it's Edward - of course he's going to make a bigger deal out of it). In a way, his musings overlap mine, and it's nice to know that something so abstract, something that can have such potential to be ambiguous and scary, the person that is going to actually figure out what the term like forever means... he makes it so simple. These are my absolute favorites:

-It feels like its something he has to understand because she wants him to promise it.
-He wonders if that’s forever, if perpetual recollection is the same thing as eternity.
-Whatever forever is, it can’t possibly feel as long as the space between two kisses.

"He watches the light as it crawls across the room, and thinks that whatever forever is, it can’t possibly feel as long as the space between two kisses."

Wow. That last line really got to me. I really enjoyed this story. It kinda caught me off guard, because it's usually Bella who I think lays awake at night wondering what forever will mean. Maybe it's just me, but it never seems like Edward would be the contemplating forever when he's so set on sharing it with Bella. Maybe it's because he's been around so long, that time doesn't mean as much to him anymore. Maybe it's his confidence on the word when he mentions it to Bella. I don't know.

But (I'm getting off topic and I don't think you want to listen to me ramble about what Edward thinks of forever) this story was just...wow. Short, simple and sweet. It beautifully written. And, as I read this, it seemed like something Stephenie Meyer would write or publish. The way you used your words and the characters, it felt like the real thing.

Anyways, getting off topic again. I loved the story. And, if you haven't fallen asleep reading this, I hope you enjoyed this abnormally long review. lol.

Beautiful!

Your writing, as always, is amazingly breathtaking. :D I love Edward's confused little musings and how Bella's able to affect him so so so so much. I loved it!

I think you're the goddess of giving birthday presents. those firends of yours, yeah, they should feel pretty lucky.

this is fantastic. I absolutely loved it.
I don't have words that can describe how amazing this us beause it just is.
you really broke the "forever" idea down just like Edward would do - because he over thinks everything.
you know, you made me think and i think that's why it's even better. there is no right or wrong answer... because you're right, forever is flexible.

gah... you're so amazing. haha. i hope i can be able to write like this some day.
it's a talent that i have yet to master - and which you seem to be queen of. this really is a work of art.

keep writing. i always enjoy your work. :)

this is story is now my favorite oneshot.

That was sweet. You're very talented at capturing Edward's thoughts.

Lovely! What a treat to find one of my favorite HP authors writing Twilight. Excellent Edward musings that feel right in character. Well done.

What an intriguing opening. Love the cerebal side of Edward. Looking forward to finding out what forever means for our dynamic duo.