Omg Great chapter :D

Kim. Always focused on the task at hand. I'm with Ron with regard to the optimal use of their "pod time." But a mission is a mission, after all.
Another fast-paced, lean, and show-worthy chapter.

Very Nice Chapter MrDrP

I enjoyed the plot twists of this story so far and this chapter is very nice.

I can't wait to see how Kim and Ron get out of a capsule plumming to the ocean floor.

On a side note, this story is turning into just as a good one as your Epic Stitch and your star trek crossover

A nice action-packed chapter that didn't skimp on the the nuances.

Even this opening convo between secondary characters displayed the writer's trademark charm:

'“What is it?” the captain asked.

“I’m not sure, but—”

A boom ripped through the center.

“It’s traveling at supersonic speed,” Cochrane offered. “Any communication?”'

I also really liked how King continues to develop. I definitely hope he gets a promotion after this mission. In fact, I can even suggest a position that might be open. :)

Speaking of our least-favorite SLUG, I think he has finally outdistanced a certain GJ top agent. His suspicions of Kim would have made Du slap his forward. In fact, I think I’m going to start referencing Du’s antics as being ‘Stark-worthy.’

Katrina again proves she is going to be someone to watch out for in the future.

The ending was jarring, abrupt, and well played.

Man you would have thought they'd gone through enough now they're in an out of control escape pod. Man talk about into the fire with gasoline underware. Can't wait to see how they get out of this one. Also nice job with her cousins escape really want to see how that one turns out.

Boy I must admit the research you did for the countdown in Russian and the military actions. Very impressive.

Although I have to admit I had epiphany with this story and "School Days" from CaptainKodak1 and gave him this review:

I think that either Kim or Ron are bad luck...

I'm not sure which one, maybe even both of them, but a lot of bad things happen to other people even when they just pass by. Look at the what happened at this mission. The other time when Ron was checking out the U that was run by Dr. D.

Remember, I've got my eye's (pointing both then pointing to Kim and Ron) on those two. Watching, always watching.

Fun story great read, thanks.

Nice chapter, brief but fun.

Look forward to seeing how they get out of this mess, and hopefully seeing Stark get roasted in the next chapter.

Keep it up!

Continuing at a nice pace, and another cliffie of sorts, since going down definitely isn't good at this point. Good chapter.

"Wait a minute. Are- are you telling me that this sucker is nuclear?"

Nice to see Stark leave Ron alone for once, too bad it was only to pick on Kim instead.

Nice chapter, hope K&R get out of the cliffhanger.

Man! This sitch keeps on getting worse and worse for Team Possible!

Thanks and God Bless
Sharper

Ah, darn that Katerina for getting away!

And even Katerina knows that Kim could not be that persuaded to join her pointless cause.

Once again, MrDrP, excellent writing! :)

Thanks and God Bless
Sharper

That last sitch for Kim and Ron doesn't look promising.And I suppose that the Colorado still hasn't actually splashed the target yet. that's a lot of scrap metal following K/R to the bottom.

Sweet

Now the politians

So the drama

LFTM

Ja ne

Jim

You know, I'm starting to think you're making a few James Bond references here and there. I also think there's still half a dozen chapters left to this story. Unfortunately, it doesn't seem to be going well. While the black sheep makes a clean get away, Kim and Ron are being buried at sea! Somehow, I get the feeling that when get out of this, Kim is really going to be in hot water when she gets back to the Enterprise. I must say it's a shame that we never found out what Katrina's super-weapon. No offense, but it was almost as anticlimatic as not finding out what the Neutronalizer does. Well, whatever you're planning, I hope it makes sense and I look forward to more.

Cliffhanger! Evil man. XD

~
Mike.