hm u havnt done edwards point of view in a while...:D

update!

Good chapter!

Leave it to Alice, to drag poor Bella on a shopping spree; what's worse is what'll happen at the sleepover, the pixie is planning for her friend.

Therefore, can't wait to find out, what'll happen next.
So, looking forward to more. Until then.

please continue!

I liked it, but I want it longer, don't leave me hanging like this.
I want to know whats going to happen in the sleepover or i'll die!!

i really liked it but make it a bit bigger!
it's so much better than my sorry excuse for a story.
*clapping for u* <3

I like your story. but i so hate cliff hangers. LOL what happens next?

I like ur story.

update soon! love this story!

Good chapter!

It was sweet that Edward got a kiss from Bella, while they were at the meadow; perfect moment.


Can't wait to find out, what'll happen next.
So, looking forward to more. Until then.

Good chapter!

Can't wait to find out, what Edward is going to tell Bella.

So, looking forward to more. Until then.

umm to be honest i dont like it ...its like the exact dialogue from twilight but faster and theres a lot of mistakes which makes it hard to read...sorry!

i like it so far. please update soon!

awh i loved this story please write more i wish u luck in writing your storys ... Black.Red.Twilight

yay! hes going to tell her??!