LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Keep going at it! I <3 Baby John and West Side Story!

i really liked the story! I wish there was more chapters for me to read. :D you really got the characters down well. :D keep up the good work!
-KC

Great story! I love it. Update soon I want to see what's happening with Baby John. K thnx. Once again update soon

Continue...please :) I really like this story. The only thing that confused me was when you switched from third person to 1st person but then i got it and it was all okay. Is Baby John like cutting himself that's awful :( I'm really looking forward to reading more please update soon

I like how you kept with the WSS theme and made A-Rab and Baby John close like brothers, this chapter was good too

this chapter review will be short I promise, his dad doesn't seem very nice...will write later when I have more to say, so far so good. No it's ahmazing (don't you love my abuse of the "A" button :)

I like the plot idea it's really cool...I also liked how you used Baby John as the abused one, it makes sense since he is the youngest and from what I've seen in the movie and the screenplay and...(never mind it would make me seem too obsessed with WSS)it works perfectly and plus even though he's in a gang he is probably like the sweetest one so you feel bad for him...so what i'm basically saying is I like your plot idea and your character choice Very Good Muy Bien (I'm taking Spanish so I add it in at random times) :)

ok awsome story please contenue it soon please

Aw, poor Baby John!
This is really good--update soon!

Wow, Baby John's mom is weird in a funny kind of way. I know I shouldn't think she's funny cuz she obviously has problems but...
So the switchblade means Baby John cuts himself? Sad.
I love the friendship between A-Rab and Baby John. Keep updating!

Hey, I loved it. I was Anybodys (the tomboy) in a local production last year when I was 12, and in our show, Baby John was my 'boyfriend' in the show... I went to the Dance with him, and we kinda messed around the whole show... So I have a special connection to the character. I think you did it VERY well... I never thought about why he was so timid. I just thought he was... you know? I like it. I want more. :)

-mP

Wow, Baby John's dad is scary. I'm afraid to meet mama. Oh well, it's cool anyway, keep it up!

cool story it is very interesting

I like this, and I just love Baby John. He's so cute. Keep it up.