Well.. my thoughts right now? Something along the lines of "I hate you". Come on, you're killing us over here. Damn cliffhangers - rarely have I felt this much over a fanfic. You're doing well with writing it, but I feel that it might have derailed from the genres "Romance/Humour" with the later chapter and now leans more to a "Romance/Angst" which you have a talent for writing.

Another thing; sorry for not reviewing these last chapters. Been up to a lot of stuff these days, but I always tune in to read the new chapters.

Well, 'til next chapter then!
Cheers

HOW COULD U! *Glares daggers*
GET THEM BACK 2GETHER! NOW!
poor Yuya *Cries* Poor Ko *Cries more*
THEY NEED EACH OTHER!! DO IT!

Oh, man. I'm guessing this is the all-time low of the fic- or does it get worse than this? Poor Tayuya, conflicted like that.

Wow... I wasn't expecting that. I really hope this works out, I don't think Tayuya and Anko should be separated like this, that and I really hate Kabuto. Nice work on the akatsuki too, I really look forward to the next chapter so I'll be here waiting with great anticipation.

Good chapter again, as usual. Congrats.

Tch. Duck-butt to the equation. How does Pink-Bitch get both chakra users? Does she know something? O.o

Glass? Raining down?! what did I tell ya about glass hnn? All the characters woulda been dead by now! NEVER UNDERESTIMATE THE ACCELERATION BY GRAVITY :P

...SNIFFLE?! Why...WHY!? Gosh.. My heart sank with Tayuya's. >< A girl crying is the worst sight ever! Dx

NEXT CHAPPY! NAO!! You can't leave us with the red-head crying! :(

*sighs contentedly* Another great chapter, love. It's been a while since you updated!

did ya mean "ward off" instead of "ward of"?

The first thing I'll say is that you are an incredibly talented author, I've read two of your fics now and I'm not only impressed by your amazing attention to detail but the fact you can write stuff like this without even following the series. I've never really been one for romance, but after reading just the first couple of chapters I quickly found myself unable to pull myself away for more than a few minutes. I've really enjoyed the story so far and personally I can't wait for the next chapter, but as much as people say otherwise a writer can only work as much as they feel comfortable with, so with all that said I eagerly await your next contribution to this story. *Phew that has to be the longest review I've ever written.*

Finally! I've nearly caught up!

Ugh! It wasn't easy, I'll say that now. I've actually been reading a lot of Fics, recently, which was distracting me. I DID read A Traitor's Reward, though. Did I leave a Review on that one? If I didn't, then I feel bad...

Back to the point, I was distracted, but, now that the competition has apparently been put on standby, I can now focus on catching up. The inly thing that ticks me off is that most of the crap I'm waiting on decided to leave me dangling on a cliff! Ugh!

I just wish to point out, though, UPS stands for United Postal Services(I think, at least, but I DO know that it's a mailing company), so, yeah... Wrong company. I think you were refering to UHAUL... Did I even spell that right? Other than that, it was good.

With all that said, I like it. Yes, incase you're wondering, I'm reading the Chapters by the bulk, to catch up. Yes, the Lemon was wotrth the wait(especially with the second one tailing it), and I feel a bit dumb for asking, but I'll do it anyway...

What's a camisole?

OHGOD TEMARI AND INO! <3
I'm kinda glad that Anko didn't feel too strongly about Tayuya doing things without telling her about it. I thought it would be bigger. Still, Anko being there for Tayuya is :3
Can't wait to see what Ino and Temari have for Anko.
And where Tayuya went..

Thanks for updating! :D

WO!! Kept us waiting enough! ^^

Though it is a set-up chappy, there's still so much stuff that makes me go AWH~ Tayuya would Die first? Wow... Now that's love O.o

*sob* The distancing between the two is painful to read.. Kill four eyes faster, damn it!! (Why won't you take up my brilliant Kabuto-trips-over-a-chair-and-dies idea? ><)

Ino-Tema humor is so amusing~~ Can't get enough of it! xD

*contented sigh* That sort of possessiveness from Temari is so sexy~ ^^ And DAMN the girl can fight! Wonder what's her story... Moar mystery! Nawh~ A fuzzy sandy-blonde is a irresistible one~ ...Much like someone I know.. xx

Keep up the awesome work!! :D And.. For the sake of what's left of our sanity.. Update faster T.T (Of course, schoolwork comes first~)

gr, i forgot to review the last chapter so i'll do it together with this one.

the story's really good. obviously. and Kabuto scares the shit out of me as a villain. I mean Orochimaru is all creepy-pedo-voldemort kinda stuff, but Kabuto is just like, shit son lighten up and go look at a rainbow or something.

So Tayuya killed a little kid? Fuck, that sucks. Just proves how much of an asshole Kabuto is.

YAY.
Wow, thats a weird thing to put after calling someone an asshole. But the yay is to the story. Not the asshole comment. Just thought i'd clear that up. Because, I dunno about you, but it confused me.

): No...
So... Kabuto can see what Tayuya can see? Or can he hear her thoughts?
Tayuya loves Anko..
Ahh.. Too much thoughts for this chapter. I'm confusing myself ;_;
I just.. It'll hurt if Anko finds out. Emotional chapter man.
I hate Kabuto ;_;

Kabuto. Must. Die!

That is, he's the latest obstacle in this story. It'll be interesting to see how this turns out.
Tayuya with emotions- having scruples about killing children- works well, even though she really is a hardened criminal.

By the way, kudos on that really hot scene at the start of the chapter. Good work!

OMG WOW!
Poor Ko-Chan tho
eh heh
write more soon
you ROCK dudette

LOL Took you long enough :3

This is a pretty fun chapter xD Felt like a filler before the drama?
Wonder what happened to Kakashi.
Tayuya sure likes to tease Anko! LOL It's be cool to see someone IRL try and hit on a teacher lol!

I think I got the concept of "Poker" after reading this. lol
"Payback time" ;33 Can't wait!