Poor Byron. :( I love reading stories about these two, but they always end up tragically one way or another. Love the way you've written them both - I could really see Bill being that oblivious and it makes me feel for Byron all the more.

Nice. I realy like Mothman, wish there was more foc about him.

Aw! I can't help it- i adore Mothman!! And the way you write him is perfect. He's just as sweet and endearing as I imagine him and Dollar Bill is just as boistrous and 'manly' as i imagnie him too.
When i reached the end it took me a moment before i realised there was no more. That was it. MM was gonna get drunk and DB was none the wiser than when it started. Damn you Dollar Bill! Open your eyes and see the poor little man in front of you! *shakes fist*
Lovely as always. :) I swear your writing can't get better and then it does.
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