Aw, I loved the ending. I wish they would have shown this in-betweener at some point during the actual show. You stayed very true to the show, keeping everyone in-character, a very hard task. :)

Awe, I'm loving this story. It wasn't until I saw the entire series that it became official, Yugi is one of my new favorite characters, just like Yuzuha. Am I the only one who notices a pattern in the Tenchi series? If you're female and a villian, then the main reason for you being a villian is simple, and people can relate to it, if not be full-blown sympathetic. If you're male, you're just evil, and hosed. :)

Hmm, I'm really liking this story. I'm suprised that there are people who like Tenchi In Tokyo, aside from me. :) Yeah, Yugi needs love.

Your take on Yugi's history is good, it certianly makes sense. :D

Now, I don't much care for Shin Tenchi. Actually, I think it's downright crappy series, unworthy of the Tenchi name. But if you're going to write a fanfiction of it, why do you have to ignore the ending? Because it clearly shows that Tenchi has gotten over Sakuya & will almost certainly end up with Ryoko, and you don't want to do that in your fanfic?

Yay! It was awesome! I was scared for a minute there, but then you mentioned a continuation. Can't wait to read it, your work is great!

Bravo!! This is definitely professional quality work. I sincerely hope Sakuya will show up later, there seem to be vague implications. I like Tenchi in Tokyo, particularly Sakuya. Continue soon!

Good to know I'm not the only Sakuya fan out there. This is pretty good stuff. It fits with "Tenchi in Tokyo" but takes things in a interesting new direction. My only complaint is that some of the girls, like Kiyone and Mihoshi, are in the backgrond too much. Given what's happening I'd think they'd have a fair amount to say.

Hey, this is actually pretty good. I felt like I was watching episodes of Tenchi in Tokyo that I never saw before. Try to continue soon, ok?

I've been keeping up with your fic and I love it! Yugi is my absolute favorite anime character. (I despise Sakuya, however!)I hope you keep on updating this fic. I look forward to reading the rest of it!!

Great job, I liked the style you used in your fanfictions. Keep on writing !

I will tell you that you are one of the few to do a Yuji story worth reading. All that is out there is either Hotsuma/Ryoko which I hate, or Sakuya/Tenchi which if done right can be good. I did like Yuji and Sakuya, the rest of the series was not good to say it nicely. If they had better animation, and better writers there could have been a better series than it was! Well please keep it up!

That was so sweet. you should really write more

Ok, I am one who didn;t like the writing or animation of the series, but i did like Sakuya and Yugi. Just these 2 chapters are loads better in quality than the original writers gave us in that series. I think the premise of the story was sound, just the exicution sucked. Now as to your story, it is easily developing to be a good story. Now since the series does not connect Tenchi or his father to jurai, nor Washu with Ryoko, will you keep going with what is obviously a T/Y story, or are you going to connect Jurai with them, and maybe use that multi-wife loophole that the Royal Family has?

Can't wait till the next chapter!

Hey! Thats pretty good. Yugi isent used that much.