Very good story. You write Jack and Tru very well.

whoa that was perfect loved it wish it could have happened
maria

That really was amazing. Beautifully done. I love the way you write. You're descriptions are so well done, I can always picture everything very clearly. I love the dialogue too, it's never boring.

I love when she said she was going to through her pillow at him! haha

I love this line: “Balance,” he told her. A balance between Life and Death.

God, I wish Track were able to reach their potential. Thank god the fandom has writers like you. *hugs*

"A Balance between Life and Death" WOW!
Great job.. Short, to the point, beautiful imagery.

Sorry it took me a while to read.

Oh my... wow... to say I'm touched would be an understatement. This is the greatest tribute I've ever received from anyone. Aside from that, your writing is just brilliant. Bravo, my love, and thank you so much!!

I <3 Jack :D and his sarcasm!!

its so good that you're writing Tru/Jack again Lar bear :D!