The introduction was powerful! Good comparison of physical and mental baggage they have to carry... with a hopeful ending. Nice fic!

Love. It!

An outlook on what chapter 96 should look like. I like how you're changing tones in your fanfic, everyone is different and has it's own mood.

I don't think I can properly express my love for this piece. The last few paragraphs are amazing!

XD Roy as a write, Riza as assistant/editor?, plus Roytachi eavesdropping, Havoc Rebecca and their daughter it all makes me so happy!

Aww, great flashback, Riza reminds me of Winry there, in a good way.

Love the concept Clair brings to Roy, and how he uses it!

That was really nice! Especially the end, where Riza's promise to follow Roy to hell turns into her following him to the future. It's a lot more optimistic, and I think that after chapter 95 the two of them would feel a great sense of relief after that ordeal. Good chapter! Ties in with the manga events very well!

:3 that was lovely great job!

Writing a piece about a soldier who dies... not a happy thing to do, especially when you picture yourself all the time on hs place. Not sure what to say about this one... I feel good that Roy found a peace of mind for his character and for himself. I guess it's good to know someone thinks of you but it sucks to die knowing it..

That is brilliance right there. Great job. I don't know what else to say, it's just so breathtakingly amazing.

Aww, that was nice great job!

That was awesome. Hee-hee :D

oh, poor Roy XD

Havoc's going to get an earful as soon as Riza steps out of the office.
Great work!

This was really, really cute. The dialogue flowed very well.

That was adorable. I loved Roy's confessions, so funny and believable! And Riza's like, "What?" XD I'm still laughing over this!

Awesome fan fiction for RoyAi day!

Funny as hell. How missunderstood one can become!