Great Chapter.

perhaps my favourite chapter so far

strangely not that interested in Alices part of the story

God that was dark. I so feel for him! I thin he had it a lot worse than bella

has bella had sex with any other guys besides Edward?

Edward always said he ALWAYS WRAPPED HIS **! He didnt in the coffee room with Aimie! If he shot all over the floor he wasnt wrapped!

Yeah, I would rather give him my virginity than the guy it went to!

loving this chapter
was so funny!

LOved loved this outake, I really loved these characters, they are so much fun

Spendor's version of Edward's life and being introduced to Bella was adorable.

Loved how playful Edward was in this chapter. Doing all the spy moves in the mall was funny. Can’t wait to see how he acts when Masen gets older and do things like that.

Aww,this is gorgeous, so light and happy, such a relief from all the angst.Shouldn't have left her on the floor, Edward!

So cute! Loved that we got to see a very realistic, normal event in their lives. It was cute, playful, and hilarious! Loved E's interaction with Rebecca. Couldn't stop smiling!

So, did Bella ever get this message? I dont remember her talking about it in the story, but then, I did sit there for 3 days straight and read the whole thing.

Weirdly, this makes me feel differently about Aimee. I hated her in the main story and I didnt trust her at all, I felt she was always there, waiting to get back with Edward. But this explained her more, she was so young and made a stupid decision and have we not all done that?
I hated that Edward dated her in the main story but it sounded way less important in this.
This made me feel really sad for them all. What a f#$%ed up waste of time and emotions. Although we hate what Edward did, the one good thing that came from all this mess was the fact Edward and Bella finally got it, that their lives without each other were just a pretty pointless mess.
Great writing. You really make us all want to know what happens in the sequel, scared you will make them suffer too much more, surely the have suffered enough. We shall just have to wait and see.

This was totally cute...I absolutely loved it :-)