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Reviews for: The Family Man
Veryfairygirl14
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT!
Dave
2009-07-15 . chapter 1
Wait, Udon became the Hokage and Naruto turned straight? Say what?
the return of pp
2009-06-14 . chapter 1
I normally like your fics, but this has problems that I couldn't ignore. The third became Hokage at age 12 and was still able to live a full life(lots of kids, too)without giving up things. As for the paperwork, Tsunade had Shizune do alot of the work, so I'd just assume that if Naruto got the job, Konohamaru would have his hands full. Also, Hinata's father wouldn't be so disapproving of the relationship, knowing who Naruto's parents are, because Naruto is now a Sage(a position that is to be respected) and because Naruto saved Konoha. Just seems like one has to ignore alot of canon to make this work.
luger 7
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
Pretty funny, man.
Gouken 2009
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
A nice, cute NaruHina story, and it is plausible that Naruto, really, has better things to strive for than 'to be Hokage'...
Well, Does someone behind a desk 23/7 have time for family, friends and 'precious people'?
Plus, Naruto's place is the battlefield... or with his friends.
Sean Malloy-1
2009-06-05 . chapter 1
Pretty funny, any chance of a full-length sequel?
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