Oh, this was amazing! It was so beautiful and wonderful and amazing and I loved it! And just amazing!

Poor Lily. Sirius was awesome of course. There interaction was amazing.

I loved the last snetence. It was so heartwrenching and sad and I loved it and just amazing!

By the way, did I mention this was amaznig?

Squid

AH SO SAD!

Aw... poor Lily...I feel so sorry for her! :(

OMG! That's shattering! I never expected of James..
Beautifully written.. I love the way you've pulled out the plot! U ought to continue.. You can't just leave it like this!

i liked it...really subtle (from the sirius angle) and very angsty...

Ah, I loved this. I'm personally a big fan of angsty romance too. Especially in a nice James/Lily story. I also love the way you write, keep it up!

First of all, who on EARTH has he moved on to and can I please kill her?!
I really liked this, although my reading was a tad distracted by a headache. You always manage to come up with something good, even if it's when you're writing SIS which obviously isn't your favourite. Keep up the awesomeness..no I need a new word..OK, so I just checked and they reckon that another word for awesome is hairy...so keep up the hairyness, haha!

its weird to read a story in this situation.. its usually the other way round. really liked it :)

RAWR. YOU KILLED MY WRITING MOOD!

So much for that whole LilyJames thing I was going to write. I will revolt against THAT story for you. That was sad. All I could think was "Sirius, you ass!" That's saying quite a bit since you know how much I like Sirius.

I'm also a big fan of that last line :)

~Katie

Hey, it's brilliant.

Omg I love the idea of James moving on!! My friends and I are trying to find the best James/Lily fanfic and yours are my favorite!! Please keep going with this one... I WANT MORE!

Ellen

I hope twitter is down more often then.

good god, will you please write a sequel to this.
I know it's a kind of final ending but, it's terribly sad to see Lily there heartbroken while James is with someone else. HE'S MEANT FOR LILY ONLY! Get away from him...B*tch! though...I'm sure that anybody who gets James Potter to forget about Lily Evans has to be somewhat of a good person at heart.
I don't care though, she stole James from Lily!! It's not FAIR! lily and James are meant to live happily ever after forever and ever and ever!! Nothing will change it! No matter how excellently you write Lily's demise... They are meant to be!!

I'm done my rant now. please consider a sequel though, I really want to see hope for the future of James and Lily like him comforting her late at night in the common room or something. I dunno, just please don't end it like this!!

you cannot leave this as a one-shot.
that's just too cruel.
to Lily I mean, too cruel to Lily :P

Aww, angsty. :-P I'm not feeling very wordy today, sorry, but I just wanted to give you a review so you'd know I read it. I like it, is this meant as a oneshot or will there be more? It could stand alone, but I also think you set it up to be more. Either way, happy writing and take care!

I quite like this one...