lol, so you beat me to the dangerous queen usage. XD

>> "All your sweets are belong to me!"

Ahaha, nice. Coalguys were awesome for including that. xD

>> Oh, the cliché irony. This wasn't the plan.

LOL!

You also got me to picture Mio, a distressed look on her face, sticking out her tongue and frantically fanning it. Adorable. >X3

This was awesomely hilarious in a compact package. You really managed to capture the atmosphere and humor K-ON! has. Good work~ :3

"All your sweets are belong to me!" I laughed.

No, the cake is a lie, a lie! The makeup part was also hilarious - it's nice to have Sawako on the receiving end of jokes.

Your writing style has improved since your Lucky Star fanfictions. Keep it up!

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"All your sweets are belong to me!" -hahah

I think this is very much like them, I can see this kind of thing happening. You're writing has a lot of diction I wouldn't think to use too. T.T

The Mio and Ritsu interactions are cute. I'm glad you're writing, keep it up!