i know this review is a few months too late, but i found this on LJ and just wanted to tell you that i thought it was very cute and nice! i'll be sure to check out your other writing now as well.

dude. he's the POTIONS MASTER. one would think he could follow a recipe.
haha no but lovely, especially ginny at the end!

haha!
I love it!!
great job!

lol, I love it, so adorably cute!

That was fun. The strawberry and cream part was quite sensuous, as well.

I have found this reading to be interesting, and cool. Keep smiling. :-)

This was a cute story. :) Nicely done.

Sunny