** YOU LAVI! Poor Allen..*crys* I love Allen dearly so its really sad for me to see him sad like that. Plus ii love yullen and hate lavi/kanda.

No! ;(
Oh,my God! I cried when I read that!
Why?! Why isn't Yuu with Allen?!
*starts crying again~*
Aww...
I would be totally hyper and happy if it was the other way around... Yuu x Allen and Lavi's unrequited love towards Kanda! Mwahahahaha! *evil laugh* XD
Oops,I really need to get my pills on time.. ^^"
Anyway...great story! xD

Omg that was very depressing T_T..in a good way :P. Grr the part that ** me off the most was how Kanda left the note and Allen's name wasn't in there >_< I wanted to punch him in the face for that, even if he didn't mean it.

I feel like such a masochist when I'm reading this. I abhor reading unrequited love and angst and such, but I always end up reading them.

Allen's denial and obsession is wonderfully written and argh, it really hurts. I'm a Yullen fan myself, so...

Your imagery is lovely. "the pile of dried leaves making a sick crunching sound as he falls onto them" is going to haunt me for a while and I'm terribly sorry about being incoherant but nrgh.

Thank you for writing!

Che, this depressed me a bit... But I loved it. Nice progression, nice flow; it was all lovely. The image of Allen falling into the leaves at the end, it all worked so well. I really loved it. Wonderful job.

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This was lovely. But I hope you know that now my poor heart hurts ... ow.

Aww!! That is so sad!! You should have wrote this under "Lavi/Kanda" category. It seems more like LaviYuu and a one sided Yullen. Sad, but great!

so depressing, so cruel and so good.
You made me feel like I had a knot in my throat, seeing everything from allen's pov, and oh god, it's sad.
I loved it! you certainly can show the feelings Allen has perfectly, and who knows?? maybe one day you'll write the laviyuu from Allen's pov without making Allen fall in love with any of them LOL

I'm giving you cookies 8D somehow I love threesomes and one-sided triangle love stories LOL XD