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Daryl
2009-10-15 . chapter 6
great story. i think shego should just be upfront about getting her memory back. this way kim won't be mad at her for being deceitful if she lies. she should also just tell kim she wants more romance in their relationship
shthar
2009-09-16 . chapter 3
"Your doofus sidekick? He's still around?"

"He lives with us."

Shego's eyes went wide, "Please don't tell me we're in a ménage a trios."

Oh please write that story! Karma Chameleon was such a tease!
chiasypee
2009-08-16 . chapter 6
This was so sweet! And I think Shego should feign amnesia :P
Etherelemental
2009-07-09 . chapter 6
I say that Shego should pretend to have amnesia again. As it is, it wouldn't be all that difficult. If she does something that she wasn't supposed to remember, she can just have it written off as that it 'felt right' rather than trying to explain some long winded answer that would have plenty of places where others would be able to guess. Although, I kinda expected something a little more elaborate as to the cause of Shego's amnesia. But then again, simplicity often makes things better than something more intersting like a traffic accident. Although, I think that just for the sake of it, Kim should lose her memory shortly after this, just so Shego has to put up with Kim thinking that they're still enemies. But that's just a side thought. As it is, I figure if you continue any part from this point, it'd be in another fic which is fine for me. Even though I had hoped that this would continue on for a few more chapters. Anyway, thanks for posting all of this. It was really quite entertaining.
darkwoofe
2009-07-05 . chapter 6
Very nicely done! I really enjoyed reading this as I have many of your stories. Keep up the great work...
XoXoGigglieGirl1
2009-07-05 . chapter 6
great chapter
luv it
u should give shego her memory bak
i luved kim nd shego's date
very creative of
can't wait to see what happens next
update soon
noncynic
2009-07-05 . chapter 6
She'd better weigh the risks. Kim's been very patient with her. Then again, telling KIm the whole truth, especially bringing up Kim's shortcomings in the romance department, might be her best course. Kim might be a little hurt, but not angry. And she doesn't want to see KIm angry, does she? Good wrap-up.
shinneodeus
2009-07-05 . chapter 6
That interesting timing when Shego got her memory back. Night after some bedroom activities.A "Love conquer all Ending"? No, Shego is thinking of milking the amnesia angle a bit further. How "evil" of her to pretend futher. I wonder if it is the lawyer in her or the criminal side? Or is it the same thing?

Read you later!
sweetPixiesmile
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
I've refrained from reviewing because I've been heavily and emotionally invested in the BE-verse that each chapter has been excruciating; my partner works with brain injury cases, so I have some familiarity with the sitch. But I couldn't have kept myself to cussing out each chapter in desperation; my blood pressure has been crazy after each instalment, especially in Chapter Five, when Kim was trying so hard and Shego goes and hits on another woman. Although, being a goody-goody, I understand Kim much more than I did Shego.

Kim definitely shone in restraining her anger and deciding to spend the time and effort in putting together an unforgettable night for her one true love (yes I can and will use those words! LOL) And it was fun to get to see the hero seduce someone for once, instead of the other way around.

My pick, if I had one, is for Shego to turn the tables on Kim; pretend amnesia and offer to take the red-head out as a thank you for last night, then rock her world. A brief call to Anne could then be acceptable. Of course, knowing Shego very well, Kim will figure it out, but having the woman she loves back in the altogether would cause her to forgive the brief deception. Hence, we get a taste of both risk AND reward, plus, Shego gets to redeem herself for the hitting on Bonnie. Which she should feel damn guilty about, even if it was reasonable at the time!
Kaede Shinomori
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
GO KIMMIE! *fangirl squeal* SHE'S MAH HERO!
Man, this is so good! I swear I was at the edge of my seat when they got back from dinner!
Uh naughty little Shego, what will she choose? I'm hoping for something that won't make Kim angry.

Another wonderful work, my friend! I'm looking forward to the next one!
-KS
List of Romantics
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
Who owes Whom exactly!?

I think Shego better slow her roll and rethink things a bit. Certainly Shego's had amnesia, but Kim suffered under the old Shego's attitudes and limited memories to no small degree. She took it, not giving up -that people is love. How would you feel if the one you most loved in the world treated you like the sh*t stuck to the bottom of their shoe? Or like their mortal enemy? And didn't care for hurting -or how badly they hurt- your feelings? That sounds a little like Hell to me.

I don't know where Shego's sudden burst of extreme, thoughtless selfishness came from, but she needs to get over herself, real quick. Kim's been doin' all the work (for Shego and their family), making the effort AND THEN SOME... If anything, it's Shego who owes her.

If you truly love someone, selfish doesn't figure into anything. At all. What's more, how can you live with yourself for duping the one you love (the people you love and love you, really) like that when you KNOW how much they worry/care, and how much it hurts them? Not to mention the damage and fallout if you're discovered... that'd be like faking cancer after going into remission because you hate mowing the lawn or doing the dishes! -talk about the death of love and trust.

AND IF YOU'RE THAT MUCH OF A THOUGHTLESS/SELFISH/UNCARING A$$HOLE you don't deserve to be loved.

You want more romance? TALK WITH YOUR WIFE ABOUT IT! Spouses aren't mind readers, nor are they servants. Better yet, you make the effort!
Captain IT
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
Oh no!
Will Shego take advantage of Kim?
Will they both now go get tatoos on theirs 'cheeks'
Will Ron get a little' cheeky' with both of them?
Stay tune for another episode of ' Kim & Shego: cheek to cheek'

Keep it KP real
Captain IT
Mr. Wizard
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
Great evening out. Love the ending. I think she should just be honest, it'll get her a lot more of what she liked from the night before I'd bet.
A Markov
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
Hm... How to answer... I'd definitely like Shego to get another night of romantic bliss, but I don't think she needs to lie about her condition to to get it. As fun as it would be to watch Kim put in some extra romance effort, I think Shego needs to fess up and move on. Maybe a little role playing would be in order some time later down the line, but now She needs to take Kim, the Twins and everyone else who cares for her off the hook. Anything else is just cruel.

I enjoyed the pace of the entire story. And the payoff at the end was wonderful. (You know I love, love, love me the open ending.) I know you were concerned about showing what had caused Shego's condition, but the drop in was fine.

Alex
Tjikicew
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
Given she brewed the coffee all by herself, she'll need a very quick disappear to check the Internet if partial recovery is possible. I have serious doubts her wife will cut Shego this slack.
She might try for a moment to pull the hood over Kim's eyes, but she's not going to be able to hide it from her kids. You can't do such a harsh thing to your kids, any parent knows!

Very nice story, well written, good structure and pleased to see people do care about grammar. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing this very entertaining fan-fiction.
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