explaination: the rozen flame. Pretty confusing explaination by itself, so good job on an alternative

First of all, don't *ever* tell us that if we read your story, we're idiotic. Way to go shooing your readers away. Have a little respect for your own work. Most people are just going to look at that warning, say, "I'm neither insane nor idiotic, so I guess I'll skip this fic" and go away, never to return.

Second, this is not a CT/HPL crossover (or a "fusion", as you call it). This is you ripping off HPL. Basically, you've just made Lavos Cthulhu and copied, sometimes word-by-word, what Lovecraft has written. Have you no respect for Grandpa Cthulhu's works? He's a master of the cosmic horror genre, and you RIP HIM OFF.

As a long-time fan of HPL, I'm disappointed in your lack of respect for him. Why write crossovers when you can't handle the genre by yourself? Actually, you even mention in your Warning that the reader doesn't have to know anything about HPL's works to read this story. So why even write a crossover, then? You can use cosmic horror elements in your stories, you can use the fear of the unknown; you can even write in Lovecraft-like way. But don't claim you're actually writing HPL fanfic unless it's really a fic based on his works, not a fic where someone recites Lovecraft.

Next time, write something original and closer to your own level. You're nowhere near Grandpa Cthulhu's class, intrasonic.

Oh, and get a beta reader. You need one.

I will freely admit that, while not the strangest deep work I've seen, it is by far the most startling, in no small part by the impossible realness about it... you have a true talent for invoking thought and contemplation, intrasonic.

Hey, this was very well done! I'd almost think that Lovecraft himself wrote it, if I didn't know better.

Nooooo waaaay...dude, I remember reading this fic on a LONG time ago. It was incredible then, and incredible now. You need to write more, man.

grim. very grim. GRIM. Grim with a capital G. Grim Grim GRIM. but good. I wonder how she would've felt if she knew that Lavos would die. it's rather amazing, isn't it? It started with a simple kid living in a town, going to a fair. he died, he was revived, and he ultimately defeated Lavos. Lavos was a demigod, and he was defeated by mere humans. whats amazing is, it is possible to defeat him in Zeal. ever wonder what this story would be like if they did that? i succeeded in it in one game. It was tough, thats for sure. it was a great game Chrono Trigger. Okay, i'm finished ranting. all in all, a great story, if a bit depressing.