LMFAO! Kawaii!

this story made me laugh my guts out ahahaha especially the kissu-pan idea, awesome , plain awesome :D hands up to you and your way of writing though i would like to see a bit more details about their expression :)

awesome!

ahaha omg... boys' love indeed

love it :)

Yeah. I'm very happy that I can see ShigeruxKazuma fic again after so long!

And, yeah, you've done this pretty well, but.. I got quite confused with the end of your story.. The part where the characters are talking with "(name): (dialogue)" pattern. Is that an omake? If so, then your omake is more interesting than your main story. I'm not saying it's bad, it's just.. I think it would be better if you rewrite that "(name): (dialogue)" patterned part to be a part of the main story.

Keep writing I'm waiting for another ShigeruxKazuma