 HeidiSue715 2009-07-21 . chapter 1That was great! I loved it good way to put the two of them together. What was Tank so mad about? |
 mssmith 2009-07-09 . chapter 1I liked this shorty...it had alot of things going for it. Thanks. |
 myminorobsession 2009-06-24 . chapter 1Excellent short Trish. You know I'd love to know about the fight with Tank and the fubar'd incident that got Ranger injured and most of all I'd love to know what more happens after this scene you wrote!! So glad to find a piece of yours to read today. :) My lucky. |
 lanicker 2009-06-08 . chapter 1Great story! |
 Ryl 2009-06-06 . chapter 1Aw... Very sweet, with just the right amount of tension. A fabulous story! |
 Sarai 2009-06-06 . chapter 1Awesome! This needs a sequel. |
 SueB3 2009-06-06 . chapter 1A perfect snapshot of Steph and Ranger's connection. I've tucked it away to read over and over. SueB |
 writersblock24 2009-06-06 . chapter 1Aw, I like this! Great job! |
 forever babe 2009-06-06 . chapter 1I know you say this is complete but I wouldn't be if I didn't ask you to please continue. There's so much you can say somany places to take this so I hope you do. Maybe this can be a prequel. |
 concetta33 2009-06-06 . chapter 1very nice short. Said it all with many words. Great job. |
 Magdalync 2009-06-06 . chapter 1Fabulous emotion and imagery. Stands well as a oneshot ... but I want to ask for more! But if you extend the story... I know you! You'll give them so many obstacles and angst...eek!
So, I want more... but this is such a great HEA. I'm torn between groveling for more and begging you to leave them at this 'happy' moment. I'm conflicted!
Thanks for writing it and thanks for sharing it with us.
Nicole |
 JiggyT 2009-06-06 . chapter 1This was a great story! I loved it. Can you please continue. I know you said it was a one shot, but why not just go all the way! But either way, it was fantastic! |
 Je m'appelle Bodet 2009-06-06 . chapter 1I liked it:D
You should make this into a series...somehow...
But it'd be really great! |
 amkp 2009-06-06 . chapter 1Loved this short story! The content was wonderful and heartfelt, the writing done well. Keep up the good work! |
 dee768nj 2009-06-06 . chapter 1Oh, wow, Trish, could really feel the emotion in this one. Very well done, as always. Love ya, babe!
Dee |