Poor Karil didn't even get to talk to Iban. Now I feel bad for him. I'm now waiting patiently for more.

Iban is too emo, and I thought he looks older, I mean. like your father like oldness.

I have 3 complaints for you: 1, Iban was too emo. 2, You are turning Verac into a little kid. 3: That was way too short.
Do better or suffer my wrath.

Just as funny as usual. Can't wait for the next update and all that jazz. =)

I was actually just about to ask you when you were going to get around to updating this. Now, seeing as I like to nit pick your stories and point out your inconsistences, I would like to point out that it is the River Lum, and Lumbridge is named after it. Just so ya know. Anywho, nice chapter, funny as usual. I would have killed you if my favorite color had not been PURPLE! And I did have to type it like that. Okay, this is getting too long. Where was I? Oh yeah? Funny chapter, update sooness, and I can't wait to see who the guest star is.

<3 Chasing Ideas/Galaxy

That did NOT end well!! Poor Talenith. :-( Other than that it was just as funny as the others.

that was a cool one nice cat joke lol
you are very funny.

kewl! can't wait.

lolz. so funny.

Lol, funny. The next chapter sounds cool, too.

First off, it's VERY sad.(giggles) And again you have done me (Galaxy) perfectly. The "huh" thing was starting to annoy me as I was reading and then I said that! You know me far too well Kina. Anywho (more giggles), great chapter. Muchos laughter. And yes, I did have to rhyme it. I can't wait to see what happens when the Brothers question us hosts.
<3 Chasing Ideas/Galaxy/Ellie/Bubbles (so confusing it's almost annoying. Almost.)

That was probably the funniest chapter yet. Though, I must say, poor Verac.

Nice, but way too short.
I command you to write more chapters OR ELSE.

I'm still hilarious. In fact; more so! This is one of the funniest things I've read on here. I can't wait to see the hilarity that ensues in future chapters. Talk to you in about 20 seconds... <3 Galaxy

This is sorta late...but that's because we were at camp. Anywho (stifles giggles), thanks for making me hilarious. I can't wait to see what happens next!