I love where you're going with this. Please write more.

Wow. Where do I begin?

First of all, I like the basic idea behind this story. The way a lot of stuff in the 'Time and Tide' AU is done is very believable, different as it is. I'It's an interesting take on a lot of things; a good Zuko that didn't have to screw his life up to be good, hints about how he got burned and he's still clearly afraid of his father, and oh, the hints of some many story possibilities.

I'm very much looking forward to future stories in this AU.

I'm also a big Toko shipper, so the premise of this gets be on many levels.

I found this less complicated than the prequel (which I'm still digesting, btw). Toph and Zuko are less changed than the Water Tribe, especially Toph. Although Zuko is different without exile, underneath he still needs to prove himself to his family.

And Toph is awesome. I loved that last line, 'cause Toph is obviously going to protect him...

What a nice follow up. I especially like it because Lu Ten is alive. He needs to be remembered in more stories.

I like how Toph is still the same girl that we're accustomed to. Seeing a shy and unsure Zuko is an interesting change as well. There are some nice hints here as to what will come. I look forward to it.

Wow! This is definitively a 180 degrees turn from the last chapter.
Both are set in the same Alternative Universe, but they're so different from each other. The past has violence, intrigue, incestous relationships... And this one a very young and unsure Zuko being engaged with a little Toph. That's very cute, and despite the pedophilic relationship here, I think it works pretty well for the plot. Besides, in ancient China the marriaged were arranged just at the birth day of the babies, and the parents married their sons whenever they need heirs, even of the children barely past the 10 years old.
Great story... You made a very expanded chapter about the whole Water Tribe situation, but this peek at the Earth kingdom-FireNation and AirNomads was pretty shrot! And I loved the rough airbender Ketu... Better than the childish Aang XD. So... what happened to the Avatar?

oh bot i cant wait plz poast them as soon as u can

really sweet
r u going to start a series out of this because it actually sounds like a really good idea especially since aang might still b frozen in the south pole

Hmm... an interesting set of oneshots so far, and quite well-written too. Do you plan on making more oneshots in this Alternate Universe?

Are you going to follow this up? It's ver good; I think it would make a great story if continued...it's very well done.:)