i think i died a little in side reading this u should keep to naruto dbz crossovers

I just noticed on my Harem no Jutsu card it should say it's a perminent Spell card.

By the way I hope you continue this fic, I just love it.

Kankuro the Puppet Master: Warrior type 2100/1500 Once he's out on the field he Special Summon's Kankuro's Puppet and Kankuro can't be destroied unless you beat his puppet first.

Kankuro's Puppet: Chakra type 1500/2500 This toy will stop all attacks to Kankuro in Defence mode.

Orochimaru Snake Summon: Ritual card Special summons Madra the Snake King in exchange for Three sacrifices.

Madra the Snake King: Summon type 60/40 You must sacrifice once every turn to make this monster attack.

Gamabunta: Summon Type 40/2500 Only Naruto or Jaraiya can Summon the Frog King.

Sexy no Jutsu: Spell card You take control of all opposing male monsters for three turns. Opposing Female Monsters will gain a 500 point attack bonus in rage while this card is out, you can tell they hate this attack.

Harem no Jutsu: Spell card You take control of all opposing male monsters used aganst you. Opposing Female Monsters will gain a 20 point attack bonus in rage, you can tell they hate this attack.

Bird Cage Seal: Spell card Useing this you will gain perminent control of any three of your opponets monsters.

Konohamaru: Warrior type 300/200 If he's destroied all the opponet's monsters above 500 attack points in thier hand, deck or graveyard are taken from play.

The Nine Bijuu Attack: Trap card Must have at least one of the Jurichinkii (I have no idea how to spell it) (Garra, Yuki, Naruto, Ect...) out on the field. This card does 4500 direct damage to your opponet.

Konohakagekure: Field card Roughly translated it means the Village Hidden in the Leaves, all Leaf Ninja get a 500 point attack power bonus.

Sunakagekure: Field card Roughly translated it means the Village Hidden in the Sand, all Sand Ninja get a 500 point attack power bonus.

Otogakagekure: Field card Roughly translated it means the Village Hidden in the Sound, all Sound Ninja get a 500 point attack power bonus.

Shinobi Nations: Field card All Shinobi on the Field get a 10 point power (Atk/Def) bonus.

Shikamaru the Lazy Genious: Warrior type 2500/40 Bringing out Shikamaru will Special Summon Shikamaru's Shadow to the field.

Shikamaru's Shadow: Chakra type 1900/? It's unstoppable defence will stop all attacks. It will only go down if you knock out Shikamaru the Lazy Genious.

Kyubi no Kitsune (Nine Tails): Demon type Special Summon 50/30 Nothing can kill this Monster if it's in Attack Mode.

Baby Naruto: 500/300 Effect: If anything destroies this card Kyubi no Kitsune (Nine Tails) is Special Summoned in Attack Mode.

Seal of the Kyubi: Trap card Using this on Kyubi no Kitsune (Nine Tails) will trap it to become Kyubi no Kitsune (Caged).

Release of the Kyubi: Spell card Used on Naruto Uzumaki or Kyubi no Kitsune (Caged) to Special Summon Kyubi no Kitsune (Nine Tails) to the Field.

Kyubi no Kitsune (Caged): Demon Type 30/20 If on the field at the same time as Naruto Uzumaki Naruto gains 20 Attack points.

Kyubi no Kitsune: Spell Card (Used like Harpy's Feather Duster)

Garra of the Desart (Sand Coffin): Spell card If this card is equiped to Garra of the Desart he can destroy any card on the field reguadless of attack or defence points.

Garra of the Desart (Sleeping): Spell card (though it looks like it would be a trap card) When Garra goes to sleep the One Tailed Tanooki is Special Summoned onto the field.

Waking Garra: Trap card Waking Garra is the only way to stop the One Tailed Tanooki's Rampage.

One Tailed Tanooki: Demon type 50/0 It's impossable to put this monster into defense More and nothing can kill this Monster if it's in Attack Mode.

Snake Seal: Spell card (more like equip card) Evolvoes Sound Ninja, and Sasuke and Anko's, power to the next level Effectively doubling thier power.

Nice. I've got a few idea. Naruto Uzumaki Kyuubi Cloak LV1: image: Naruto Uzumaki covered in the one tailed cloak. Warrior/effect: This card can only be Special Summoned by sacrificing 1 Naruto Uzumaki while either Sasuke Uchiha - Cursed Seal LV2 or Orochimaru is face-up on the field. During your next Standby Phase, if 1 Orochimaru is face-up on your opponent's side of the field, Tribute this card and Special Summon 1 Naruto Uzumaki - Kyuubi Cloak LV3. ATK/DEF: 2500/0

naruto Uzumaki - Kyuubi Cloak LV3: image: Naruto Uzumaki in the three-tailed Kyuubi Cloak. Warrior/Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the Effect of naruto Uzumaki - Kyuubi Cloak LV1. If Orochimaru is face-up on the Field, tribute this card to Special Summon Naruto Uzumaki - 4-tailed form.

Wind-Style - Rasen-Shuriken: This card can only be equipped to Naruto Uzumaki and Naruto Uzumaki - Sage mode. If equipped to Naruto Uzumaki, destroy the equipped monster after it attacks.

Naruto Uzumaki - 8-tailed form: image: Naruto in his 8-tailed state. Beast/Effect: This card cannot be Special Except by sacrificing naruto Uzumaki - 6-tailed form while Pain is face-up on the opponent's side of the field. Once per turn, you can destroy one monster on the opponent's side of the field. If you do this, you cannot attack with this card.

Naruto Uzumaki - 6-tailed form: Image: Naruto in his 6-tailed form with an unconscious Hinata below him. Beast/Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of Hinata's Sacrifice.

The Akatsuki: Spell: Image: nine cloaked figures in front of a statue with many eyes. Effect: Special Summon as many monsters with the name Akatsuki in their name as possible from your hand or Deck.

Sorry for doing a second review for the same chapter but here is a good card 4th hokage this card cannot be normal summoned or set this card can only be special summoned when you do not have a naruto uzumaki on the field By not being able to attack you can place a kunai counter on all opponents monsters.
Hiraishin: you can only activate this card when you have the 4th Hokage on the field and your opponent has monsters with kunai counters on them destroy all monsters on your opponents side of the field with kunai counters and deduct half of their atk points from their opponents life points. if you activate this card you must skip your battle phase.

great story a good card idea is will of fire you can equip this card only when a level 7 or higher monster is in your graveyard remove it from play and add the attack to the equipped monster. when this card is destroyed the attack of the monster becomes zero

its spelled anko mitarashi

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Frankly, I am impressed with the idea that you came upon. A cross-over between Naruto and YuGiOh-GX.

Although, I have to say that there are a few "a little too powerful" cards in your list. Here is what I suggest to a few of them:

Naruto Uzumaki - Genin
Level 4
Light Type
Ninja/Warrior/Effect Type
1500/1500
This card cannot be normal or special summoned if you have “Naruto Uzumaki – Apprentice of Jiraya” on your side of the field.
If this card destroys a card, put an experience counter on it. This card gains 500 attack point s for each experience counter on it.
If this card has three experience counter at the end of your turn, you can tribute this card to special summon one “Naruto Uzumaki – Apprentice of Jiraya” from your hand, deck, or graveyard.
There can only be one “Naruto Uzumaki – Genin” on your side of the field.

Naruto Uzumaki – Apprentice of Jiraiya
Level 8
Light Type
Ninja/Warrior Type
30/2500
This card cannot be normal summoned, special summoned, or set.
This card can only be special summoned by the effects of “Naruto Uzumaki – Genin”
This card cannot be destroyed by battle.
If this card destroys a card, put an experience counter on it. This card gains 500 attack points for each experience counter on it. This card cannot have more than three experience counters on it.

Minato Namikaze – 4th Hokage of the Leaf
Level 10
Light Type
Ninja/Warrior/Ritual/Effect Type
4500/4500
This card cannot be special summoned.
This card can only be ritual summoned by the effect of “Tragedy of Pain” spell card. You must also tribute one “Naruto Uzumaki - Six Tailed Form” from your side of the field to ritual summon this card.
This card cannot be destroyed by battle.
This card is unaffected by Spell or Trap cards.
When this card come into play, you can tribute this card and one spell or trap card you control to negate the effects and activation of all spell and trap cards you opponent controls this turn. If you activate this effect, destroy all cards your opponent controls.
At the end you of your turn that this card was ritual summoned, destroy this card. If you do, special summon one “Naruto Uzumaki – Apprentice of Jiraiya” from your graveyard, hand, or deck. That card cannot attack this turn.


Tragedy of Pain
Spell Card/Ritual
This card is used to Ritual Summon “Minato Namikaze – 4th Hokage of the Leaf”. You must also tribute one “Naruto Uzumaki - Six Tailed Form” from your side of the field to activate this card’s effect.


Rasengan
Spell Card
Can only be activated if there is a monster card with the name “Naruto Uzumaki” or “Jiraiya” on your side of the field.
Destroy one card on the field.


Chidori
Spell Card/Quick Play
Can only be activated if Kakashi Hatake or Sasuke Uchiha is in play.
Increase the attack of Kakashi Hatake or Sasuke Uchiha by 20 this turn. If Kakashi Hatake or Sasuke Uchiha attacks a defense position monster whose defense is less than the attack of Kakashi Hatake or Sasuke Uchiha during the turn this card is activated, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponent’s life points.


Anyhow. Good story aside from a few sentence construction issues. Keep it up

*smiles* I think that Hiryu-kun's love interest should be from the series.

here is a card u could use sage card. i dont no a atk or def. thing but for a effect any face down or defense card on the feild must go to the grave yard and cant come back for the rest of the duel and also the toad sage it gives naruto and jiraya 40 more atk points




hope this can help keep righting plz

This part of the duel is awesome. And I think it would be a good idea to have a naruhina pairing. Here are some more card ideas.

Hinata Hyuga: water, warrior,lv.4, atk.1500, def.1500, effect: While this card is in face up defense position, your opponent cannot attack any other warrior type monster on the field. If 'Naruto Uzumaki' is face up on the field, tis card gains 10 extra defense points.

Kiba Inazuka: earth, warrior, lvl.4, atk20, def.10, effect: Once per turn while this card is face up on the field, you can choose one face down card your opponent controls and take a peek at it.

Naruto and Hinata: earth, warrior, lvl.7, fusion, atk.2800, def.2500, effect: When this card is successfully fusion summoned, special summon 2 Naruto Uzumaki Tokens( lvl.4 atk.1800, def.1500)

really good chapter. if i had to choose between the two fusions... id have to go with the naruto/sakura fusion... guess its one of the downfalls of eing a dieard narusaku fan lol -_-'

interesting story i would like to see more of been done keep up the good work.

Great chapter you shoud have the Naruto and Hinata card spirits become a couple and friends with Jaden and Alexis. Tell me what you think.