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| Reviews for Parallel Moon |
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   Moon Sea Star 6/7/10 . chapter 16I love this story! It's so sweet :) I'm sad you ended it so soon... |
| Mason and Alex 6/6/10 . chapter 16 love it ;D |
| DesignatedReader 5/8/10 . chapter 13 Good job but short |
| DesignatedReader 5/8/10 . chapter 12 Good segway but way too short. |
| DesignatedReader 5/8/10 . chapter 11 Needs more detail. But a good concept. |
| DesignatedReader 5/8/10 . chapter 10 Good but short |
| DesignatedReader 5/8/10 . chapter 9 Good writing but way too short. |
| DesignatedReader 5/8/10 . chapter 8 Good job writing bpov. |
| DesignatedReader 5/8/10 . chapter 7 Wow I like that we didn't have to read the angst of them waiting for wks on end for a battle to start. Nice writing. |
| DesignatedReader 5/7/10 . chapter 6 You cliffhangered me! Nice writing. |
| DesignatedReader 5/7/10 . chapter 5 I like your Bella, she doesn't whine give up on life. There's something special about a fighter. |
| DesignatedReader 5/7/10 . chapter 4 The first meeting seemed a litttle rushed. Not bad though. You managed to cram in all the important info. |
| DesignatedReader 5/7/10 . chapter 3 I love me some Jacob. Still a little short. |
| DesignatedReader 5/7/10 . chapter 2 A little bit short but otherwise good. |
| DesignatedReader 5/7/10 . chapter 1 Nice start. Can't wait to read more. |
