I hope they are both okay and I hope Carrie and her men are not gonna hurt them. Please, please, don't make something horrible like being raped happen to her.

This chapter was very, very sweet. I always thought season 2 Michelle looked too shy, too innocent, as if she lacked of experience with men (judging by how nervous and unsure of herself she was when she asked him out, and how she hesitated before kissing him), so it kind of doesn't surprise me that in your fic she's never slept with anyone and he's gonna be her first (which I find totally, completely adorable).

First off, I hate Carrie, SO MUCH. Which is a good thing, because it means your Carrie is very well written: you only hate a character when it's really well written. And I just adore how much in love they are with each other ♥

Last paragraph was love ♥

I think I had read this before, although I don't remember. It was a good first chapter. Off to read the rest now :)

Update soon, please!

I really enjoyed this story so far, and I love the add of action on the final chapter.
But I have to say, you seem to make Michelle come across as weak and defenseless :/

great work buddy love how uve encorporated action!

lol this was cute!

Great job! This chapter reminds me of how much i hate carrie lol!!

I remember this from oh, last weekend! Great to see you posted this!

hey! these 2 chapters were great! i LOVE tony and michelle and this is lookin like its gonna be a fab story! PLEASE continue (soon :-) )