you write such sweet things
!
jajaja stop that!
ajaja just kiding! ;)

keep writing!

This was really beautiful.

It was completely realistic and I liked that it ended at their wedding. The descriptions are amazing and it had me feeling all gooey inside. =] I love that your James remembers all of the silly little things as well as the big, important ones.

Thank you so much for sharing.

:)

this is beautiful. you are a fantastic writer. so much emotion, you've captured a wonderful picture.

That s seriously one of the sweetest things I've ever read. xD

Daw. :33

Fluff is damn annoying for me usually, because I have a general penchant for drama and conflict, but this was SO CUTE! -dies-

Seriously. I'd say something a little more eloquent, but argh, you have rendered me speechless. Words fail me as I totally fail at telling you how...touching this was. :3 The long syntax works for you and makes the whole thing float along and...gah. So much cuteness! x.x

Thanks for a lovely, lovely read. You're epic. That's not a compliment I give everyone. ;)

Update anything again soon.

Cheers!
Xx

Love,
Zay

loved it :)

I'm glad you're back! I've missed reading your work. This one-shot was wonderful. So sweet, and you can really see how much they love each other and how much they appreciate the little things. Great job!

that was beautiful. great job! i am so happy that you are back. you are a great writer! keep up the excellent work! =]

Very soft, very sweet, and, as always, very well done. You use repetition very well in this piece, allowing the memories to fall into a cadence that makes reading easy and a pleasure.

I've missed reading your work, Mina, so I'm glad you're back, but equally glad that you took the time to disappear, if that's what you needed. Welcome back! I look forward, as always, to reading more.

Realmer

aw it was so good it was gah words can not describe it was like i duno really really cute and sweet and yea
keep it up

xx

Aw I loved it *-*
This was very very good! Amazing job!

I love the overall theme, the butter and the "I'm yours, I love you, everything's alright" and the remembering.
I did think at the beginning when you were describing the intermingling of items and how Lily would go to get something and not even say anything (and it was cute), "No get out now! She's going to dump you." But maybe I've just been primed to think that after my last big breakup.
and the thirtieth time! I love you. No one ever describes it like that. And they should. Because you end up wanting it so much the times just combine together and you remember bits and pieces from each but mostly just the general ecstasy and overlying happiness you get from sex.
aw this is so fluffy and cute.
just what I needed. (calc three starts tomorrow and I've been in bed all week after getting my wisdom teeth removed. boo)
thanks!
thestoicwarrior

This is really beautiful. There's this combination of smoothness and reality, like when it says, "-but then she kissed him and the butter in his stomach churned and his heart warmed and yeah. Yeah. Everything was good." That was definitely my favorite line. There's a lot of voice from James, and yet no dialogue. That's amazing.

Seriously, you are a stunning author, and I couldn't be gladder that you're back from hiatus. I'm sure you won't have trouble finding your niche again. :)

Aw! Adorable! I love how you can make something so cute and still have it flow so well. :)
I'm glad you're back!
You're one of my favorite authors, so I'm glad that you have the time to write again. :D

Have a good Sunday,
T.C.