Aw cute! Nicely done! Love Harry and Hermione :D

"Hide the fact that saying those words was little taking a blunt instrument and stabbing herself in the heart." - If Hermione was stabbing herself in the heart, would she not use a sharp instrument to do so, instead of a blunt one? Blunt instruments are more for crushing than for stabbing, IMO.

OMG I love this story! It's totally going in my favorites!

I really enjoyed your fic, it was very well-written. My favorite part is when poor Hermione is trying to save face stumbling over words on her doorstep about it not being her and it just being a reaction from breaking up with Madeline, etc as Harry finally realizes what's been in front of him all along and kisses her. Great work, keep it up. As for for recommendations checkout librarywitch, broomstickflyer, and robst for some great drama, action, humorous stories.

WE need more grins. GREAT job Please oh Pleaes continue this. a little I would have loved hermione to get nervous and apperate away to think and so on and Harry just shows up and there they are. Hugs you. Write more soon.

Aww, that was soo cuute!!<3
I swear that last passage kept me smiling for minutes! :D
Great job,
keep up the good work~~

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Great story. I believe that this chapter will be great if you turn it to a longer, novel length story. It's brilliant in it's simplicity. The only thing that confuse me is the jump between August to October. It seems many things happened between those times.
I also would like to read Harry's POV so perhaps you'd like to post it? Please?

It's really great!

this was very good
i just love the 2 of them together
its fate

I liked this a lot. Going to check out your live journal for more. Continue this!

That was exactly something Ron would say. Ginny is so flakey.

Good piece but the middle came together weird. Was this two different pieces and you just put them together to make it longer? Hermione was written well. Harry not so bad. Would have liked more back story.

love love love love this

update this

That's a great Mazzy Star song. I'm guessing that's where you got the title. Interesting plot. Like how you got it all together. Harry never was much of a planner.

So good! Update please.