Please tell me there's going to be a sequel to this. The story is absolutely addictive and I can't help wondering what new intrigues Helen has up her sleeve.

This is really great there just arent´t enough stabby fics out there great work :)

I loved this fanfic, I had just started reading it last night and didnt finish till early this morning..lol. Will there be a sequel to this story? Or was this the end.

Aww you old romantic, you. I feel like I am waiting for the other shoe to drop tho'.
Rose

Crikey, that was quick, just sent off the last review and the next ch, popped in.
Lotsa fun. Great action, most enjoyable still.
Rosemary

Ooer, a wallhanger, no I mean a cliffhanger. More soon. Hooked here.
Rosemary

ARRGGH! now what? very good :)

And I remain in awe.
Sorry I had to wait 'til the weekend to catch up. 1. you write hot good sex, I am jealous ( I tend to write ... sex, prude that I am) and 2., I am still hooked on a fandom I have never seen a program of. Pretty clever writing, honey.
One or two nick-picks. You take the other tack, not tact and Connor had romantic illusions not allusions ( unless he was referring to some other romantic thingy, grin)
Only pointed out because they threw me out of the wonderful flow of your story.
Bravo
Rosemary

I love this story! And I especially love how quickly you're updating! Can't wait for the next chapter :) Istalindar

Hi! Me again. I'm being awful, because I really ought to be revising for my RS exam right now, but I made the mistake of checking my email and found the alert and there went the studying. I'm also meant to be reading Time and Distance, but the email was just sitting there... So I cracked. I am still reading Time and Distance, but slowly, around funerals and christenings.

I'll get there!!

And I must say, I do really like this. The dyspraxic part of me is quailing but I find myself enjoying it! Which is odd, because normally, I run screaming from this sort of thing. Because of my abject dislike of such awkward situations, I'm not so hot on this one, I like the otehrs more, but I still like it.

On the positive side, I think that you've written this fantastically. Stephen's portrayal is fantastic, and I like how you have brought in old aspects of the first Stephen and childlike aspects. The reactions are within the character portrayals we see in the actual series, so kudos! I actually can’t find anything particularly wrong with it – and that came out worse than I meant it to. What I mean is: that you’ve done absolutely nothing wrong! I didn’t even find any typos! I wish I could do that. I particularly love the way you used Helen at the beginning, without even naming her. Now THAT’S good writing.

What I would recommend is doing more from Stephen's POV, in a way. Not in first person, but like his view of things. The first section of the first chapter is kind of what I mean. This is simply because we see most things from Abby’s view, and Connor’s and Cutter’s etc. I also think it would help connect the audience to Stephen and show things from his end. Stick in his description of things he sees to show how new things are.

Anyway, I’ll leave you to write, and actually look forward to the next instalment! (And pray I don’t fail... whoops.)

That was enjoyable and well written. But I hope Connor's not going to remain "an arse". And I hope Becker will put in an appearance. I like them both, although it's mostly on potential for Becker, since the show hasn't done much to develop the character. But a person who's willing to sacrifice himself for others is always of interest to me, gotta love a hero.

Still hooked,
You are quite freakily good at dialogue. How about script writing?
How come I am enjoying a story in a fandom I don't know - gotta be the writer.
Loves ya
rose

Hehe awesome! Can't wait for updates! xx

Crikey, aren't you getting to be a good writer. I have absolutely no idea about this fandom, never seen it. And there you are, you sucked me in from the first paragraph and now I want to know what happens!
Write this well for romo and you will be published, sweetie.
Loves ya
Rose